Desert Water - Part 2

[lovesrain44]

It was only hours later when he woke up; he could feel it in his bones how long he’d slept. It would have been nice to have slept through to the dawn, but his stomach was punching the insides of him and his leg felt hard and angry.

Comments

[morganslady]

Lovely story. I've been to Tucson in July, yes I lvoe the heat,but it was amazing once you step out of the house how hot it really is..

[lovesrain44]

How kind of you to come by and comment! It's a quiet little story that I wrote ages ago, but I wanted to capture that part of the world, the blistering heat! Oh man. But it's beautiful too.

[amothea]

I really loved the imagery and character voices. :) wonderful continuation of your previous story Fairy Lights. :)

[lovesrain44]

You are more than kind, and I'm glad you liked the story. Sam and Dean should have sex, and often!

[amothea]

You won't get any arguments from me! :)

[lovesrain44]

You should be writing. Are you writing?

[xkatjafx]

I was cheering yesterday morning when I noticed you posted new SPN fanfic \o/

Anyway, great story! To be honest I was a bit skeptic about the scene where Sam decides to leave the Impala and walk on foot - even though the Impala was still kind of working, and then who gives a damn about the car if Dean might be dying? But I absolutely adored the later scene where Dean was accusing Sam of killing car and then realizing that Sam suffered though heat, thorns and whatnot just for Dean and the love for his car. It's my favorite scene of the story.

btw, -> go through the schpeel
I don't know if you did this on purpose, but isn't that written "spiel", since it's German? (Just curious if there is a "transcribed" version or not.)

Are you doing spn bigbang this year? Meaning, is there something to look forward to? : )

[lovesrain44]

Yeah, new SPN fanfic! I don't know why I never posted this before. I know when I wrote the first one, I was still wrangling with wincest, and hadn't gotten my brain around it. Hence, the very low key sex.

I'm glad you liked it and yeah, Sam would walk rather than mess up the Impala, plus, I wanted him walking through the desert being miserable, going through what I went through in AZ the last time I was there. It's only fair! Plus then Dean can feel a little sorry for him later and give him some poor-poors. : D

I don't know how it's spelled correctly, but I wanted to spell it so that when people read it, they could see how it would be pronounced.

Again, thank you for your lovely comments!

And yes, I signed up, god help me. Help, help, help.

[xkatjafx]

I know when I wrote the first one, I was still wrangling with wincest, and hadn't gotten my brain around it. Hence, the very low key sex.

*g* Didn't feel that low key. Anyway lots of porn does not make a good story. Especially if there's no point to sex besides them having it.

I wanted him walking through the desert being miserable, going through what I went through in AZ the last time I was there. It's only fair!

Poor Sam *g* When I read those scene I was actually wondering for a long long time if Sam's wounds were infected and he was actually having fever and whatnot... Just because he constantly seemed to be about to collapse.

Again, thank you for your lovely comments!

Thank you for the lovely fic!

And yes, I signed up, god help me. Help, help, help.

Great : ) So what will it be? Gen, Sam/Dean? I don't think you'll dabble in J2 - or do you?

[lovesrain44]

Hey, thank you! I kept thinking about it sitting there on the back burner, and decided it needed to be finished and posted. Sam and Dean need to be in love, always. And somehow, their love seems most appropriate in the desert, although I don't know why that is....

[jorma_duran]

You really do atmosphere so very well. Your descriptions of the heat are so vivid!

I love your characterization of the boys, too. Thanks for continuing this.

[lovesrain44]

Why, thank you very much, how nice of you to say! Sometimes I think I go a little overboard, but it's fun to write about heat because it's so damn miserable to suffer through it without a/c. And the boys should be miserable, because they're so beautiful when they are.