Fic: Pearly Whites

[lovelylytton]

Title: Pearly Whites
Prompt: Teeth/AU at sm_monthly . No way I could not touch this.
Characters: Mina, Zoisite
Genre: Horror, Dark (meaning this has an R-rating)
Summary: He has no idea. She however does.

Comments

[last_haven]

Amusingly, this is the SECOND fanfic/creation that has to do with serial killers and monsters on my friends page today. Maybe it's a sign!

Awesome story--for some reason, the idea of keeping teeth as mementos is really chilling to me, more so than some other body part. Then again, I'm also slightly phobic of dentists or people getting near my teeth. You hit me right in my primal fear! Really amazing. Also also, love the little backstory detail of him remembering being half drowned--he feels alive as a character with it. (If that made any sense...)

[lovelylytton]

I think every flist needs more monsters and serial killers (only fictionalised, of course). :)

Keeping the teeth struck me as a really chilling idea too because while they are the easiest to carry around with (no liquid, small), attaining them is such a violent act and tells you so much about this person.

Thank you for your lovely feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

[sugarcross]

First reaction: there HAS to be a vampire.

Second reaction: EEEEE VAMP!MINA VAMP!MINA OMGYAAAY :D

Third reaction: LOVELOVELOVE! Lytton wrote a fic that has all my greatest loves (and one of the kinky pairings) in one fic - Mina (my baby girl, score!), vampire (double score!), Alternate Reality (triple score), horror that turns out to be beyond awesome because of my addiction in all things twisted and gothic and sinister!

This is the first piece of fic that I read in TOO LONG and I'm literally grinning. The awesome has rendered me utterly coherent. That and the fact that the post-exam mood still makes me giddy,

It goes without saying this belongs in 'Memories',

[sugarcross]

I meant 'incoherent' above....

But yes, I HEART THIS!!

[lovelylytton]

SO glad about that! Thank you!

[lovelylytton]

And your first reaction already solved the fic's supernatural secret. Clever you! There was not even a moment's hesitation as to whom I should make vampire - it was Mina from the get-go. Dunno why. Perhaps the combination of sexuality, potential for great violence and control?

Elena, your comment = love. Thank you so much, it really maybe my day - no - week.

(are you participating in ficathon this year?)

[jenbunny]

oh my ... oh my oh my oh my, I ... really liked that. Very chilling, but I really enjoyed reading it. great work!

[lovelylytton]

Thank you, dear Jen!

[cbrandtwright]

Glad your muse is back! And great casting in this one...

[lovelylytton]

Thank you! I decided to give good old Kunz a break, he is on the receiving end of my sadistic authorship too often as it is.

[sugarcross]

Reading this for the tenth time and remains madly in love. Maybe more so. Can I bribe you to write more of Vamp!Mina, pretty please? She's so evilly cute.

*puppy eyes*

[lovelylytton]

Oh, the muse is a mean and inconstant mistress at the moment and won't allow me to revisit any verse, but I'll keep in mind how much you liked Evil!Vamp!Mina and will hopefully be able to give you more in the same vein at some point. Elena, thanks so much for your feedback on this, it means the world to me to know that you liked this ficlet so much!

[sugarcross]

I'll keep in mind how much you liked Evil!Vamp!Mina and will hopefully be able to give you more in the same vein at some point.
This is me reading this:

:D:D:D
*hyperventilates*
*plots how to get Lytton to write moar Evil!Vamp!Mina in the (hopefully) near future*

Most wonderful thing to know to start my summer.