Fic: Pearly Whites

[lovelylytton]

Title: Pearly Whites
Prompt: Teeth/AU at sm_monthly . No way I could not touch this.
Characters: Mina, Zoisite
Genre: Horror, Dark (meaning this has an R-rating)
Summary: He has no idea. She however does.

Comments

[ellorgast]

Lytton, WHY are you so amazing. Seriously. You could be publishing original short stories with your talents, but then we would lose your brilliance and I would be sad.

Brilliant answer to a prompt. Scary in so many ways. I'm so glad I didn't read this at night.

[lovelylytton]

Spirit, you are giving me the warm fuzzies. Original fiction is still faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar away in the future for me, but if I ever do tackle it, then your encouragement will certainly play a part in it.

[apsaraqueen]

oof. the thought of keeping teeth is so creative, and so simple but conveys so much! how do you do it?! and mina is such a bamf, and zoi is such a creeper - if i had to pick one of the senshi or shitennou to be this messed up, i feel like it couldn't be anyone but these two, so echoing the rest of the comments - brilliant casting, and of course brilliant writing as always ;D

[lovelylytton]

Thank you so much for your lovely, lovely comment! I am delighted that the casting is agreeing with you, I did toss a few ideas around, but this is what worked best for me, so I'm glad that you can see it too. :)

[charliechaplin2]

ooooooooooooooohhhhhhh I love it when you write things like this. It reminds me of Whodunnit and it's just genius. It's creepy and scary and fun too, creepy serial killer Zoi is killed by vampire Mina!

I feel both this: ^___^ and this: O_O at the same time.

[lovelylytton]

Thank you! You're right, this is a bit reminiscient of the whodunnit, perhaps that's why I enjoyed writing it so much. :D

[elianthos]

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: I'm reading this in full daylight yet I'm whimpering.
You awesomevil storyteller you XD

[lovelylytton]

Thanks, Eli! I do so love making people whimper!