Fic: Work

[lovelylytton]

Title: Work
A/N: Written for the Fairy tale/Shakespeare prompt at sm_monthly . Consider this my very, very deep bow to the genius that is ellorgast  with her sexxy slashly soxx. My Mamoru is neither as funny nor as emotionally complex as hers, but he is one thing: angry. Honestly, no idea where this fic came from.

Comments

[jenbunny]

aww poor Mamoru, in this one he just needs a hug and well his friends ^^ great work! love it! ^___^

[lovelylytton]

He does, he needs a manly group hug with lots of back slapping and secretly wiped away tears. :)

[ellorgast]

OMG I WISH I WEREN'T ON MY PHONE SO I COULD PROPERLY FANGIRL OVER THIS SO FOR NOW I'LL JUST SAY THAT I LOOOOOOOVE IT!

[ellorgast]

Lytton, can I tell you how much I LOVE this, and I'm honored that you'd think of writing something in the Monstersocks verse! You and V both keep managing to take these characters and do something I never expected with them, yet still make them fit exactly how I picture them in my head. You're brilliant!

I LOVE that this is first person. I can't do first person. I get bored being in one character's head after about two lines. But you make it work so effortlessly!

In the past, there was a moment when I had everything. I was a prince, but that’s not the point, totally not the point. The point is that I had a family, I had friends, and then I even had Serenity. I had it all, and suddenly, I didn’t. Here I am, reborn an orphan with amnesia and four stones in a box that no longer come and talk to me.

If these lines were giftwrapped in an ugly jacket and some roses, they would be Mamoru. It not only sums up his situation but why his situation is so important for him

[lovelylytton]

Lytton, can I tell you how much I LOVE this, and I'm honored that you'd think of writing something in the Monstersocks verse! You and V both keep managing to take these characters and do something I never expected with them, yet still make them fit exactly how I picture them in my head. You're brilliant!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LIKING THIS!!!!!!!! You know how much I adore Monstersoxx, as I've said before, it's my happy place and when I looked at the prompt, I thought: do I dare to soxx it? And then there was too much temptation to resist it and here we are.

I LOVE that this is first person. I can't do first person. I get bored being in one character's head after about two lines. But you make it work so effortlessly!I can count the number of first person fics and drabbles I've written on one hand, but since I could never hope to capture your brilliant narrative voice, I knew I had to do something different here. The first draft included way more swearing, to the point where it almost sounded more like Neil than Mamoru, so I had to

[ellorgast]

I thought: do I dare to soxx it? And then there was too much temptation to resist it and here we are.

I'm glad you went for it! Just look at the results.

Well, it's your Mamoru: does he even own cufflinks? I think he'd be in utter bliss even if he and Kunzite could only meet for BSE-ridden burgers at some hole in the wall. :D

You're right, he probably doesn't have any yet. But in his dream dinner, he so would. There is a reason he fights in a tux. :D

Yes Mamoru, if it's Friday today, you're only two days away from the awesomeness that is Neil!

Precisely! I love that you remembered the detail about his library complaints. And the implication that he spent the whole damn weekend there.

[cbrandtwright]

For the record - I love you did first person!!! And what a treat, off to read all the rest of what you've posted!

[lovelylytton]

Thanks you! I usually don't write in first-person, but this wouldn't come together any other way.

[charliechaplin2]

MONSTERSOXXX!!! MONSTERSOXX FROM TWO OF MY FAVOURITE AUTHORS!!!!

[lovelylytton]

I think you're now reading through a whole month worth of sm_monthly submissions, aren't you? :)

Also: Monstersoxx is great, monstersoxx is fantastic, I love the monstersoxx very, very much.