rock rock fashion baby [ fic ]

[lovelyable]

cover and spread
cl/seungri | r, 3946 words, ar
seungri's on a sinking ship.

Comments

[aishiteru_amie]

whoa!
that's deep.
and i'm a sucker for ri/cl pairing!!
thanks!!

[lovelyable]

thank you for reading :)

[gdgdbaby]

FUCKKKKK. like i told you already, i was totally expecting chaerin to be dead by the end of this thing. but omg she wasn't and i loved how everything came around full circle, and screaming LOL SEUNGRI, why so earnest? :') all the references to the shows and augh, cl's many and varied problems made this so real :D ILU! ♥

[lovelyable]

WELL HELLO and jskdlkf i think everybody was expecting me to kill her hahhahah (why is this my life ;-;) oh seungri! idk! we will have to ask him when we meet him! ty bb! i lab you moar moar <3

[flufy_umbreon]

oh wow. I don't even like this pairing but just, this was incredible ♥

[lovelyable]

you know, i don't particularly like the pairing either, but i'm glad it worked for you in this! thank you for reading :)

[swrighteous]

i'm probably gonna end up rambling here, so forgive me, but this was brilliant

The way you write, but even just like, placement of characters and little tiny moments of description and stuff..
...like chaerin's prada dress stained charcoal when we finally see her dark childhood/past...
.. this moment: Chaerin seems to jerk out of a trance before she drops his hand with a snort, bony fingers slipping past his before they're back on the bar top. - like she's finally decided which she wants, this destructive lifestyle, rather than Seungri, or a better life...
.. and especially the new freckle on her face, right below her eye (in the light of the latter description of the freckles making her more human) at a moment of, almost sweet, intimacy between her and Seungri

[lovelyable]

AHH lksldk your review made my night! i can't believe you were able to gauge so much from my words and were able to derive so much symbolism from it, sobs. this means a lot to me because i'm a little rusty right now, so thank you so much for such an insightful review. i'm so glad you liked this so much. thank you for reading ♥

[swrighteous]

aww bb, no problem, its only insightful because your talent was there to comment on in the first place :)

[whetstone]

i was expecting chaerin to die so i'm happy she's still alive, even though they aren't together anymore, which makes sense cause they wouldn't have lasted anyway. :( the scene where seungri is about to go to the college party, the aborted shotgunning scene lmao and then the bookend introduction scenes i think are my favorites. and omg i fucking love seungri in this when do i not love him idek.

[lovelyable]

;-; even i thought i might have to kill her but it didn't work out that way. lmao you and your seungri newfound love!!!! :||| waylt. oh wale, maybe they can give it another try in a couple years if she's still alive and kicking (which she will be, baddest female). ty ♥