rock rock fashion baby [ fic ]

[lovelyable]

cover and spread
cl/seungri | r, 3946 words, ar
seungri's on a sinking ship.

Comments

[swrighteous]

i'm probably gonna end up rambling here, so forgive me, but this was brilliant

The way you write, but even just like, placement of characters and little tiny moments of description and stuff..
...like chaerin's prada dress stained charcoal when we finally see her dark childhood/past...
.. this moment: Chaerin seems to jerk out of a trance before she drops his hand with a snort, bony fingers slipping past his before they're back on the bar top. - like she's finally decided which she wants, this destructive lifestyle, rather than Seungri, or a better life...
.. and especially the new freckle on her face, right below her eye (in the light of the latter description of the freckles making her more human) at a moment of, almost sweet, intimacy between her and Seungri..
... and the pictures used fit wonderfully..

i just - i dunno, this is the sort of thing that each time you re-read, a new shocking, heartbreaking detail is uncovered, something that you missed because it was small, inconsequential, but then you realise is vital and shattering. Beautifully written, i'm gonna stop now, lol, thank you for sharing <3

[lovelyable]

AHH lksldk your review made my night! i can't believe you were able to gauge so much from my words and were able to derive so much symbolism from it, sobs. this means a lot to me because i'm a little rusty right now, so thank you so much for such an insightful review. i'm so glad you liked this so much. thank you for reading ♥

[swrighteous]

aww bb, no problem, its only insightful because your talent was there to comment on in the first place :)