you're done with it! ;A; man, you have been productive! :) going to edit this comment later too but i will try to leave a comment more productive than 'i like it' orz.
EDIT - that was... i'm not going to say cute because it was not really cute, maybe adorable? i just love the way you portrayed sungjong, i'm having a hard time finding the right words but i don't know, i love how he doesn't waver even when jisook is angry and he's getting what he wants without him doing anything.
“Wae?” he piped in an innocent voice, glancing between their hands and Jisook’s face. “We might as well hold hands if you’re going to be like that, nuna.” i just love how he can be innocent and at the same time, he knows exactly how to play to get what he wants. :) that's totally sungjong, that mix between innocence and mischief.
the dynamic between them is quite cute, i don't know, i really liked it. it's not too fluffy nor cliché, it's just cute in a realistic way.
Yes, I got that impression of Sungjong from the video with Hwangbo and I really wanted to portray that side of him. Everyone thinks of him as an innocent kid who would be shy and hesitant so he takes advantage of that and just bluntly does what he wants. XD
i think you really did a good job. well, i'm probably not the best person to tell you that but you portrayed that side of him perfectly. it's really perfect how you can make the readers feel tons of things without expressing them with words.
sungjong is just plain cute and he knows it. some maknae can't pass for innocent but he totally can and doesn't mind using that card.
CUTEEEEEE! I can't comment much since I'm still getting to know mroe of Infinite and dont know much about Rainbow. :/ But this is really cute. Not too fluffy yet Sungjong, I mean the way you wrote him, have the ability to keep that smile plastered on my face without fading. hehehe. Just like how Jisook's disbelieving laugh in the end.
He's really an annoying puppy. :P But a cute one. How cheeky of him to take advantage of the situation to hold his noona's hand. ^^
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going to edit this comment later too but i will try to leave a comment more productive than 'i like it' orz.
EDIT - that was... i'm not going to say cute because it was not really cute, maybe adorable?
i just love the way you portrayed sungjong, i'm having a hard time finding the right words but i don't know, i love how he doesn't waver even when jisook is angry and he's getting what he wants without him doing anything.
“Wae?” he piped in an innocent voice, glancing between their hands and Jisook’s face. “We might as well hold hands if you’re going to be like that, nuna.”
i just love how he can be innocent and at the same time, he knows exactly how to play to get what he wants. :) that's totally sungjong, that mix between innocence and mischief.
the dynamic between them is quite cute, i don't know, i really liked it. it's not too fluffy nor cliché, it's just cute in a realistic way.
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sungjong is just plain cute and he knows it. some maknae can't pass for innocent but he totally can and doesn't mind using that card.
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He's really an annoying puppy. :P But a cute one. How cheeky of him to take advantage of the situation to hold his noona's hand. ^^
waiting for the JaeYeol one!
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