An Appetite for Love - Part II [Winter] (Chapter Two)

[lovedefect]

Title: An Appetite for Love - Part II [Winter]
Chapter: 2/5
Pairing: Masuda Takahisa x Tegoshi Yuya
Rating: More or less PG
Summary: Massu and Tegoshi celebrate their four month anniversary, but Massu wishes they didn't have to pretend all the time.
Disclaimer: If I owned them, this would be a movie instead of just a story.

Comments

[dizzy_starshine]

The way you describe the places makes them so real and seeing the pictures add to it. I love how you write these two. You make them guys rather than one girl like.
I'm happy to see more of my beloved balloon fic again.

[aichu]

Yay, then I have achieved my goal. ♥ I just re-read Part I over again and realized that I actually had made Tegoshi really girly... (shame) My view of Masuda and Tegoshi as a couple has definitely matured over the years. I'm glad that you're still a fan of my stories though. ♥ I feel like you are one of my most loyal readers.

[genki_mt]

Oh ... I love it, I just dashed into the washroom where my sister is taking her shower to tell her that you've continued writing AAFL, *jumps around happily*

You have written this is in a very believable style, seeing that I've followed this fic since the beginning I can totally see the progression of both Tesshi and Massu's feelings for each other and also their feelings regarding their relationship and how it's sometimes taxing on them having to conceal it from the world. Great work and please, please continue! Thank you very much!

[aichu]

Haha, comments like yours make me really happy. ♥ I'm glad that you two have still remembered AAFL after so long. That's what made me want to actually continue it after all. :)

[genki_mt]

I'm totally glad to comment cos it means I've got your fics to read. Write on! And thank you ...

[heartmint]

This was probably one of the first fanfics I've ever read since I entered this fandom, and I love it to pieces!
I've read it dozen of times and I'm so happy you decided to continue it. ♥

I don't know why, but your fic makes me want to hug Massu rather than Tegoshi (and he's my favourite). He's so sweet in here.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

[mau3112]

yay~ i miss this fic ^^ i really hope u will continue it. i really love it ^^. ur way of writing style is so romantic-ly cute XD nice XD.

pulling Massu over to stand in front of him and tucking his arms around Massu's waist, inside of his jacket
aww~~~ i imagine this and feel mushy inside XDD

"I guess you're right. What we're doing right now is pretty suspicious though, isn't it?"
XDDD so cute XD

[yuyako16]

oh!!
so sweet ne..
i love it..
it made me love tegomassu pairing even more..
haha..
this definitely made my day..
although it took me a long time to read this because i needed to start from the top..
i've finished reading it..
and i love it..
haha.
i really do..
update soon ne..