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Save A Pony, Ride A Logan - sarah_p

Feb 15, 2006 00:15

Title: Save A Pony, Ride A Logan
Author: Sarah :)
Pairing: Logan/Veronica
Rating: R
Spoilers: Through 2x11, Donut Run
Word Count: 4917
Summary: An old friend reaches out to mend fences between Logan and Veronica...
Disclaimer: Not mine. Duh.
Thanks: The idea for this came about while talking to herowlness. While I probably should have just left it alone, ( Read more... )

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Comments 35

ladydisdain225 February 15 2006, 15:34:50 UTC

You have such an excellent comedic sense. I was giggling so hard.

Brilliantly done, and extremely impressive for your first fic.

sarah_p February 17 2006, 10:27:40 UTC

Coming from you, this means a lot (because, hi, fic goddess and all). Whoo! There's that whole thing where when you've never written VM fic before, getting character voices down is HARD, especially when you have to ork in ponies and matchmaking, so I'm glad the humor came through. Heh.

Thank you so much, D!

:)

taken_with_you February 15 2006, 18:49:49 UTC

OMG, you had some awesomely funny moments in here. And hot. Smutty. Fluffy. Gah.

Favorite exchange: Veronica's back hit the wall hard, yet all she registered was Logan's lips on hers, and the insistent entrance his tongue had since made into her mouth.

"God, Veronica, I've missed this," he breathed out between kisses.

"Me too," she admitted. She moved her hands down and slipped them under his shirt,

Favorite sentence: Logan's fingers plunged deep inside of her, his hands everywhere and nowhere all at the same time, and Veronica was lost to the sensation. So...imagery-y. Ahhhh.

Favorite line (you're appreciating the distinction here, no?): "So that's where it went," Logan mused, as Veronica crinkled her brow in confusion. "Your ass," he clarified. "I was looking for it."

You're brilliant! *slathers you with kisses* Danke!

sarah_p February 17 2006, 12:18:52 UTC

I wrote VM fic! And people read it! DUDE.

Wow, though. Thank you *so* much for your comments! Ironically, the smut (or...semi-smut) was the part I had the most problem with (smut is HARD, yo), so to see that these lines worked for you really, *really* helps. *sighs in relief*

Thanks again, for reading, and for letting me know what you thought. Yay! :)

taken_with_you February 17 2006, 19:44:11 UTC

Yes, people read, and they loved! LOL

Also voted for you for best cupid...certainly the most *unusual*...

taxidoll February 15 2006, 21:58:23 UTC

LOVE this, and props for the title ;)

sarah_p February 17 2006, 12:19:47 UTC

Hee, thank you! And I almost wasn't going to go there for the title route, but...come on! It was BEGGING to be done! :)

skk670 February 16 2006, 01:44:45 UTC

You need to add a warning - do not read the "My Little Pony" portion while eating or drinking. I was laughing so hard than I nearly shot soda out of my nose. That was a very cute story. And yes, GI Joe really is compensating.

sarah_p February 18 2006, 10:12:32 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! Who knew that there was such univeral MLP love? It makes me all warm and fuzzy :). And, DUDE, I am so glad that someone agrees with me on the G.I. Joe front. Because...come ON!!!
:)

sinca February 17 2006, 02:44:45 UTC

That is SO adorable! I loved the way this story started and the flashback was entirely cute and really funny.

Great job. First VM fic? Impressive!

sarah_p February 18 2006, 11:30:38 UTC

Yay! When one has it in their mind that they're going to write a Logan/My Little Pony fic, it's *really* hard to set that up, so I'm glad that the flashback worked. Because if it didn't, seriously, there is NO OTHER WAY. I brainstormed and everything ;).

Thank you so much! :)