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Fic: Losing to Win - gertinator

Aug 19, 2006 15:47

Title: Losing to Win  
Author: gertinatorRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

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elizalavelle August 20 2006, 14:57:31 UTC

guh! I love your LoVe fics! I'm a little speechless right now but you've done some wonderful writing here!

ziebra August 21 2006, 03:41:37 UTC

Hee... I remember this from before and am glad that we have a bit of a sequel here. So, so romatic and perfect and *Hot* I would also love to see how he makes it up to her "later." Trilogy anyone?

ps..... full circle?

gertinator August 21 2006, 03:47:24 UTC

Another chapter of Full Circle should be up tonight, though it might be the wee hours. I am working on it right now.

afrocurl August 21 2006, 08:11:28 UTC

So I loved the first version that I read the other day, but this one is just as good, and equally fun and hot.

I love that Pink!Veronica can still be sexual and that Logan is still interested in being a romantic with her, even without all of the snark.

I have a big grin on my face from this, and now I'm off to read Full Circle!!!

saramitra August 31 2006, 02:52:51 UTC

such a cute fic!!! I actually like that she didnt O, as you said it's more realistic, and that makes this fic stand out in my mind a great deal.
hahaha i love Lilly in this. :)
I'm currently workin on an Innocent!Veronica fic (unposted as of yet) and wow I admire you for makin LoVe work so well. Great job!
Logan+Leather=drool attack. YUM.

sandundershoes December 6 2006, 03:37:25 UTC

Just a comment on the realism thing: it's also not so common for girls to actually have hymens anymore. I mean, yeah, it still usually falls somewhere on the spectrum between uncomfortable and painful the first time, just because of the sheer geometry of the way everything fits together, but a physical barrier is pretty unlikely, since girls are usually pretty active these days.

Other than that, super realistic and a good read.

gertinator December 6 2006, 04:17:23 UTC

Yeah, I agree that the whole hymen thing is rather mythical at this point, that's why there was only a small bit of resistence, etc. Could've just been first time tightness.. and in other fic, I dismiss the hymen thing completely. The active lives women today lead naturally stretch their bodies, and pre-intercourse explorations often dismiss the rest. I certainly have no desire to write some bloody pain blah blah blah scene. Though I did have a friend who had such a painful time she could barely walk afterwards. Yikes.

Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reading!

sandundershoes December 6 2006, 07:01:39 UTC

Yeah, I've got a few friends who've had times like that. It's so good to hear that there are people who don't cling to that just because it's traditional.