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Fic: Losing to Win - gertinator

Aug 19, 2006 15:47

Title: Losing to Win  
Author: gertinatorRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

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la623 August 19 2006, 23:31:33 UTC

I really loved this...definitely realistic...so cute...the ending was so funny. :)

sitebuilderchic August 19 2006, 23:50:02 UTC

Woah. Hotness.

Leather pants. Karaoke. White dresses... I'll never thing of these things again without thinking of this fic. Brava

gertinator August 20 2006, 04:19:26 UTC

I really have to credit pants_a_thon for the leather pants. Check it out! They just extended the deadline, and the world needs more Logan in leather!

MMmmmm. Logan. Leather. Mmmmm.

boom_queen August 20 2006, 00:17:01 UTC

Yayyyy! Olivia, I love your fics! You write the damn sexiest Logan. Loved the leather pants. Loved the chemistry and sexual tension. Even loved the karaoke, for all of its cheesy but flirty goodness.

gertinator August 20 2006, 04:16:48 UTC

thank ya kindly, ma'am. *tips hat*

And might I add, your icon is HOTT!

The karoake thing is so silly, it just came to me in the car one day as I listened to the song. I totally thought it was crack!fic... and then loveathons posted the challenge. So now we will have a lovely deluge of cheesy Karaoke goodness. I'm so excited!

boom_queen August 21 2006, 05:18:49 UTC

Ahh, the hips icon. *sighs* Sooo hot. Credit goes to piratesdaughter but I just had to snag it!

saramitra August 31 2006, 02:55:27 UTC

O.O loving the icon as well. *drools* ;)

insunshine August 20 2006, 04:25:07 UTC

Wow, hon, just wow.

This is great, just really excellent fun.

Awesome job!

gertinator August 20 2006, 04:56:56 UTC

Thanks!! I don't think I commented on your fic (read it just before bed last night... you know how it is when you are really to tired for one more fic, but you read it anyway?)

Anyway, I totally loved it. I was a huge Styx fan back in the day... *sings*

Some nights I wake up, I look at your pillow... Hoping that I'll see you there...

Yes, I owned it on 8-track. Which shows just how old I am. *Sighs*

Have you ever seen the That 70s Show where they are all secretly getting tickets to see Styx, but non of them will admit it? We all love it, even if we don't want to admit it. Kinda like karaoke.

Thanks for commenting and thanks even more for writing awesome fic!

insunshine August 20 2006, 06:07:38 UTC

I totally have seen that episode.

Ha.

Yeah. Except my Styx love is totally out in the open now.

Oh well.

Also, thank you. I've been writing like crazy these past few days, so I'm not sure which one you're talking about, but thank you, all the same.

I appreciate it!

taken_with_you August 20 2006, 07:27:09 UTC

Yayyyy, realism. :P You're right on the money there.

Noticed one small typo: Logan held her gaze and smiled. "I know. It's okay." He began to slid in and out, slowly at first and then gaining speed as their bodies found a rhythm to share. I think you meant, SLIDE in and out. ;-)

Also, lovvvved this: Logan opened his eyes slowly, taking in the eager, beloved face below him. His voice was hoarse and raw when he finally answered. "Just - love me... that's all I want, Veronica. Is for you to love me." Anguish and desire threaded their way through his tone, as he revealed far more than he had ever planned to.

I totally think this could be something that romantic-pants Logan would say, and awww, so heartbreaking.

So glad you added to this for the loveathons challange. :-D

ML

gertinator August 20 2006, 07:35:59 UTC

Thanks for catching the typo. Somehow, I always miss them in the smut ;-)

And thanks for the lovely comments. I am lovin' loveathons!