It's here....

Oct 29, 2007 20:20

Only a Heartbeat Away ( Read more... )

fanfic, writing, ghost hunt

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Lovely arianataniyama October 30 2007, 04:04:21 UTC
I thought Ayu's death scene was a beautiful touch, and the ending with Mai and Naru was well written. I only noticed one typo, "The bag led a lot of old money." was probably supposed to be "held a lot of old money."

Of course now I am rooting for your next story to start soon. Excellent job. I appreciate the great ending to my Monday!

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