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love_of_anime

Chapter 3...

Apr 30, 2007 13:28

I am posting Chapter 3 here to see what you die-hard fans think. Any and all input welcome...

Thanks again go out to

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fanfic, ghost hunt

Comments 12

akinarei May 1 2007, 02:31:03 UTC

Wai!! You updated! Nicely done! ^_^

Poor, poor John. He's going to have to go to lots of confession-- if he ever remembers, that is.

I wish Lin would Mai at the hot spring.

Yes, I'm shameless. ^_^

love_of_anime May 1 2007, 02:40:31 UTC

Wish Lin would "what" Mat at the Hot spring? A nice steamy kiss huh? You want Lin--Mai action don't you? Hm, might be doable, let me ponder the idea. ^-~

akinarei May 1 2007, 04:23:08 UTC

Why yes, a nice steamy kiss. XD.

Speaking of kisses, I have to go back and start revising that one. Yay...

love_of_anime May 1 2007, 04:30:54 UTC

Hey, hey why are you revising it? You shouldn't do that...It was hawt!

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thejenx May 1 2007, 05:21:17 UTC

O noes, Masako is going to try and kill Mai! XD

Buwahaha, not only was there fungus but there was MasakoxJohn. Still by way of the spirit, but I don't care. It was cool anyways. And poor Mai. I would hate getting in a hot spring in my pajamas. There's nothing worse than the feel of wet underwear.
....Ok, that should aNOT be the worst thing about the situation, but I'm a freak.

Update! Kthxbai! =D

love_of_anime May 1 2007, 05:24:18 UTC

It's okay, that was not too freaky, besides I needed a good chuckle. By the way, I have to agree wet underwear is nasty!

akinarei May 1 2007, 05:43:08 UTC

So very, very true!

sakura_h_chan May 2 2007, 02:04:28 UTC

YAY Naru got there in time thank kami for that!

Eeep another cliffy, you always leave me wanting more ^-^

Great chapter.

sapphire_18 May 2 2007, 12:10:15 UTC

hmm... your fic and aki-chan's fic is starting to sound alike... the getting-hazy-mind-want-to-kiss-like-crazy-bit... XD but anyway, its cool... ^_^ i will be looking forward to the next chapter!!!! i want to know what masako would do to mai... XD

oh yeah, about the chapter title... the title "forbidden encounter" came to mind because of the john and masako thing, he is after all a priest and you know... forbidden... hehehe XD but that is just a suggestion XD or how about "things are not what they seem to be" or something like that... because of masako's strange behavior... XD well i dunno, those two titles popped in my mind while reading this XD