Chapter 3...

Apr 30, 2007 13:28


I am posting Chapter 3 here to see what you die-hard fans think. Any and all input welcome...

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akinarei May 1 2007, 02:31:03 UTC
Wai!! You updated! Nicely done! ^_^

Poor, poor John. He's going to have to go to lots of confession-- if he ever remembers, that is.

I wish Lin would Mai at the hot spring.

Yes, I'm shameless. ^_^

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love_of_anime May 1 2007, 02:40:31 UTC
Wish Lin would "what" Mat at the Hot spring? A nice steamy kiss huh? You want Lin--Mai action don't you? Hm, might be doable, let me ponder the idea. ^-~

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akinarei May 1 2007, 04:23:08 UTC
Why yes, a nice steamy kiss. XD.

Speaking of kisses, I have to go back and start revising that one. Yay...

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love_of_anime May 1 2007, 04:30:54 UTC
Hey, hey why are you revising it? You shouldn't do that...It was hawt!

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akinarei May 1 2007, 05:10:20 UTC
LOL!! Because it needs to catch up on current events. Really, that's the only part of the story that hasn't written itself And I'm taking the shoulder part out and doing something different. I think I'll make it a bit more clinical since this is Lin we're talking about; it is clinical if you look at it. Er... in some cases. Besides, I'm annoyed with some parts of it; there's repition up the wazoo and that needs to be weeded out. I see red marks when I print it out tomorrow. I'll cart it to school with me; not like I'll have anything better to do with the semester winding down. XD

I need to get John's kiss going-- he'll be the toughest; Yasuhara comes next-- his is planned out; Lin's kiss and then after him, Gene. Then square one again, with a twist. Yep, yep. ^_^

Saa, thanks for the gmail invite! ^.^ As sick as I am of my hotmail account, I still have to keep it; I find I can't contact my beta-reader with the gmail. But that's okay; I need something reliable for ff.net. And hotmail isn't that, by a long shot.

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love_of_anime May 1 2007, 05:12:54 UTC
Okay I gotta send you an email.... :)

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love_of_anime May 1 2007, 05:19:22 UTC
I just sent an email to your gmail account! ^-~

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