Small fanfic

[love_me_gentily]

This is a Yaoi fanfic i've been workin' on, it isn't very Yaoi right now, it's just the beginning

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[tofumice]

Me and Daroch, yeah. I and Daroch

Uh, only thing is, for proper grammer purposes, those should be reversed. Daroch and me, yeah. Daroch and I. Also, some minor spelling errors like adding a D to an and making it AND. Just things like that. Can't wait for the second part lovey! I always love your little yaoi stories... teehee.

[love_me_gentily]

Lol hey cut me some slack! I was doing it really late at night

Next one's coming soon, glad you liked it ^^

[tofumice]

Haha. I changed my math teachers little 'news alert' white board because he spelled 'blessed' blest and I was freaking out the whole class. I'm a grammer freak if I know it's wrong.

[love_me_gentily]

Lol grammar junkie XD

I did that to my french teacher the other day...oh yeah...FRENCH....i'm so sad

[lemon_bing_bong]

OMG! Look who actually read a story! XO Yay!!! Dude! That was very intruiging!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Let me know when it's finished! XXDXDXDXD

-LBB

P.S. OMG! XD

[love_me_gentily]

Hehehehe Thankies LB ^^

The next one is out now ^^