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love_jackianto

Drabble: Resplendent Bastard

Jan 06, 2009 11:10

Title: Resplendent Bastard
Characters: Captain John.
Rating: G
An: Episode related: Kiss Kiss Bang Bang.
Written for the tw100 prompt: Endangered Words.
Endangered word list under cut.

( I used all the words on the list )

tw100, drabble, captain john

Comments 22

akamine_chan January 8 2009, 02:45:33 UTC

Nice.

love_jackianto January 8 2009, 15:23:25 UTC

Thanks :D

drabblewriter January 8 2009, 23:48:52 UTC

Good job! This really fits John's personality, and you fit all the words in seamlessly.

love_jackianto January 9 2009, 03:02:40 UTC

Thanks.

rustydog January 11 2009, 18:15:08 UTC

Nice! This sentence and the last paragraph made me shiver:

As the golden light of the rift surrounded John, he told a little lie.

love_jackianto January 11 2009, 18:24:02 UTC

Thanks. I needed way to fit Skullduggery in and who's to say that John didn't lie about finding Gray just to stick it to Jack (and then he really did find him).

That last paragraph really is a self-filling prophesy.