Comments | love4chemistry: Case of the Ex (5/?) - LoVe

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Case of the Ex (5/?) - LoVe - NC-17

Aug 30, 2006 22:57

Title: Case Of The Ex
Author: love4chemistry
Characters/Pairings: LoVe, a little DuVe (I know, gross), features Meg and other minor characters.
Rating: NC-17, for language, possible violence, and later sex scenes
Summary: Aaron Echolls has a secret. A good one. The story of Veronica and Logan's rocky relationship and their many breakups and makeups ( Read more... )

logan, logan/veronica, love4chemistry, veronica

Comments 27

Hot water annest_of_annes August 30 2006, 16:26:43 UTC

*c'mon, first comment...!* YES! This just got RIDICULOUSLY interesting! (Also, I'm tooootally waiting for them to have sex in the tub. Because that would be interesting any day!) The Duncan conversation was fantastic, and I thought Veronica's screaming fit was good. Sometimes, I don't think that writers realize that these characters aren't all verbose, that sometimes they would be at a loss for words. I really like that you put her in that situation and made it realistic. In keeping with the characterization, I'm interested to know if you will keep Duncan as a nice but relatively ignorant party, or if you will go against canon (like everyone else seems to) and make him some evil, manipulative monster. I think it serves your purpose to have him act just like he did in this chapter - nice, but sometimes oh, so stupid!

That's enough with the concrit. Now, get on to them in the tub!!!

Re: Hot water love4chemistry August 30 2006, 16:31:42 UTC

Haha, thankyou very much! With reference to Duncan, I don't think I am going to make him the villainous character that he sometimes is in LoVe fanfiction, because, in all honesty, I don't read him that way. I think he is a much less appealing choice for Veronica BECAUSE of his passive, oblivious nature, and while he can be a bit of a dickhead sometimes, like in this chapter, he will definitely not end up being a mass murderer in my story!

And don't worry! Next chapter is wholly devoted to LoVe in a tub!!!

Re: Hot water love4chemistry August 30 2006, 16:33:47 UTC

By the way, I'm going to friend you, because you are a sweetie, and I also love your drabble!

Re: Hot water annest_of_annes August 30 2006, 19:03:58 UTC

Ooh, yay! I'll friend-whore myself out for drabble. Not on LJ, of course, but in real life. I mean... what I meant to say was, ooh, Love In A Tub should TOTALLY be the title of an entire story. I think your feedback rates would be through the roof. Yes, I can see it now, Logan, Veronica, rotating spa jets...I mean...*trots off to take an ice cold shower, a la Veronica Mars*

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la623 August 30 2006, 17:20:36 UTC

Oh man! You're evil! Duncan's an ass! lol...can't wait to read more!

love4chemistry August 31 2006, 03:24:30 UTC

Hahaha! *evil grin* Yes, you may think I'm evil now, but hopefully after the next chapter you reconsider. Or maybe you won't. Who knows?

la623 August 31 2006, 03:52:54 UTC

I guess you won't know till you post the next chapter and I comment! :)

perfect__weapon August 30 2006, 17:45:57 UTC

Seriously,it always pissed me off that Veronica went back to Duncan and even stayed with Duncan after all the things he did. I loved this chapter but I wish Veronica would have just bitched him out and gah! More soon.

love4chemistry August 31 2006, 03:28:10 UTC

I totally agree, Jen. After her whole "don't piss me off or I will ruin your life" attitude in Season 1, I never would have thought she would become Duncan's doormat so quickly.

But who cares. Logan won in the end! Thanks for reviewing.

What's not to like rindee August 30 2006, 18:02:25 UTC

This is fun, and I love where you've left them - ya big tease. Duncan is such an ass - can he be any dumber? And totally in character. I an thoroughly enjoying the back and forth of Logan and Veronica's fumbles. Post more soon.

Re: What's not to like love4chemistry August 31 2006, 03:38:15 UTC

Haha, I aim to tease! And I am glad you think they are in character, because one thing I cannot stand about other fics is when they are out of character, and they are all mushy. That is not the way I read them so I get a bit turned off by that. Having said that, I think that the first few chapters of this story was a little out of character in some parts, but I'm chalking that up to it being my first story.

Anyways, thanks for the lovely comment!

berry_hearts August 30 2006, 18:14:16 UTC

i think i can SMELL the cookie crumbling....hmmm
i really like this fic.
and i LOVE LOVE LOVE the bathroom scene! hehe. Veronica should just get up and leave...but I don't think she will.

love4chemistry August 31 2006, 03:40:34 UTC

I think Logan would appreciate it very much if she just up and left, since she's all wet and naked! And you are right about the cookie. Crunch time is coming, and major developments are coming up in the next chapters.
Thanks for the feedback, it was great!