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Case of the Ex (5/?) - LoVe - NC-17

Aug 30, 2006 22:57

Title: Case Of The Ex
Author: love4chemistry
Characters/Pairings: LoVe, a little DuVe (I know, gross), features Meg and other minor characters.
Rating: NC-17, for language, possible violence, and later sex scenes
Summary: Aaron Echolls has a secret. A good one. The story of Veronica and Logan's rocky relationship and their many breakups and makeups ( Read more... )

logan, logan/veronica, love4chemistry, veronica

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Hot water annest_of_annes August 30 2006, 16:26:43 UTC

*c'mon, first comment...!* YES! This just got RIDICULOUSLY interesting! (Also, I'm tooootally waiting for them to have sex in the tub. Because that would be interesting any day!) The Duncan conversation was fantastic, and I thought Veronica's screaming fit was good. Sometimes, I don't think that writers realize that these characters aren't all verbose, that sometimes they would be at a loss for words. I really like that you put her in that situation and made it realistic. In keeping with the characterization, I'm interested to know if you will keep Duncan as a nice but relatively ignorant party, or if you will go against canon (like everyone else seems to) and make him some evil, manipulative monster. I think it serves your purpose to have him act just like he did in this chapter - nice, but sometimes oh, so stupid!

That's enough with the concrit. Now, get on to them in the tub!!!

Re: Hot water love4chemistry August 30 2006, 16:31:42 UTC

Haha, thankyou very much! With reference to Duncan, I don't think I am going to make him the villainous character that he sometimes is in LoVe fanfiction, because, in all honesty, I don't read him that way. I think he is a much less appealing choice for Veronica BECAUSE of his passive, oblivious nature, and while he can be a bit of a dickhead sometimes, like in this chapter, he will definitely not end up being a mass murderer in my story!

And don't worry! Next chapter is wholly devoted to LoVe in a tub!!!

Re: Hot water love4chemistry August 30 2006, 16:33:47 UTC

By the way, I'm going to friend you, because you are a sweetie, and I also love your drabble!

Re: Hot water annest_of_annes August 30 2006, 19:03:58 UTC

Ooh, yay! I'll friend-whore myself out for drabble. Not on LJ, of course, but in real life. I mean... what I meant to say was, ooh, Love In A Tub should TOTALLY be the title of an entire story. I think your feedback rates would be through the roof. Yes, I can see it now, Logan, Veronica, rotating spa jets...I mean...*trots off to take an ice cold shower, a la Veronica Mars*

Re: Hot water love4chemistry August 31 2006, 03:34:15 UTC

Haha, LoVe in a Tub is actually the title of my next chapter! Does that give you an idea of where I'm going with this? But beware, I aim to tease, so don't get your hopes up too soon. I might just be screwing with you. Or maybe not. You will just have to read on to find out!

And I can totally see that. Logan, Veronica, sex in a spa... yup, that definitely sounds possible!

Re: Hot water annest_of_annes August 31 2006, 03:56:34 UTC

I think that if we combined our dirty, evil minds, we could totally dominate the entire planet. I'm just throwing that thought out there...

and no teasing! You said the words "Logan, Veronica, sex in a spa..." I completely expect to see that followed through! Quickly!

Re: Hot water love4chemistry August 31 2006, 04:02:09 UTC

I am all for a combined domination of the world. Transforming air into smut, totally!

And I will follow through with "sex in a spa". But the question is not 'will she?' it is 'when will she?'... *evil laugh*

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