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fic: Blame It On The Henney Part 2

Jun 06, 2011 21:59

Title: Blame It On The Henney Part 2
Author: lovablelexie
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Lea/Dianna
Summary: Dianna left that morning needing some time to think. What happens when she comes home?
Disclaimer: This is a total piece of fiction, I own nothing and no one involved
Word Count: 3,330
A/N: Thank you to everyone who read and commented on the first ( Read more... )

achele, nc17, glee

Comments 10

sannn87 June 7 2011, 02:24:55 UTC

YAY!!!!! u TOTALLY made my morning :D LOVED LOVED LOVED this!!! very emotional and realistic and wonderful and then sexy and just BEAUTIFUL!!!! totally worth the wait (and quiet agony, but let's not guilt the writer lol).

what r u planning to tackle next, if i may ask????

lovablelexie June 7 2011, 02:40:00 UTC

As always, thanks for reading! What good is fan fic if not for a little agony every once and awhile?

Up next, I want to get another chapter of Seeing Double finished and maybe a sequel to Denial amongst other things. There's just so much I want to write and so little time!

sannn87 June 7 2011, 10:30:10 UTC

oooooh le drama of seeing double is always awesome!!! and denial was fantastic as well so....... yeah, i'll just (im)patiently wait for whatever you put up next :D

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lovablelexie June 7 2011, 02:37:37 UTC

A Grofachele threesome followed by Achele coming out? My God if that happened in real life I would be a happy girl! (Not that we would be aware of the threesome but my God, what if we were?)

flipflop555 June 8 2011, 06:13:11 UTC

d'awwwwwwwww this was beautifullllll =)

lovablelexie June 8 2011, 11:38:57 UTC

Thanks for reading and so glad you liked it!!

brettt_ashley June 20 2011, 03:04:23 UTC

I really, really liked this fic!! Just like you made the first one seem believable, this one just seemed so authentic. As you know, I loves me some angst! But I liked that you didn't draw it out and make it into a whole ordeal. Their relationship seemed so perfect with the way they could overcome Dianna's apprehensions. And the way you wrote Lea was so heartbreaking perfect -- she was always so concerned about Dianna's feelings. The line "can I touch you?" and Dianna's reaction was honestly like the saddest thing I've ever read!! But it set up their reconciliation so well. And I really liked how by the end, Jon was no longer a point of contention. Personally, I hate when best friends get fucked over because of relationships so I just liked how you tied up that string.

Oh and the rings!!! I think the rings were my favorite part. I just loved the symbolism of Dianna taking it off and Lea wearing both. And then everything coming full circle by switching hands. That was such a cute idea!!

Also, morning sex. Me gusta ;)

lovablelexie June 20 2011, 23:00:06 UTC

First and foremost, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU. You are all sorts of awesome and I love your reviews!

I love the little things you picked up on because they were the things when I was writing this that I hoped people would like. It broke my heart to write the "Can I touch you?" line but I thought it was something Lea would ask in a moment of uncertainty. And yes, I could have drawn out the angst but I really didn't want to with this story. That's the main reason why I had Dianna tell Lea to call Jon, to show that she was okay with their friendship and that things wouldn't be weird between them. (Although they probably won't be having tequila shots with each other any time soon!)

And the rings...yes! I made sure to mention them early on in the first part so it would be more heartbreaking when Dianna took it off. And when she told Lea to put it on her left hand, I had such a perfect image in my head of that scene, I only hope it came off as beautiful as it did in my mind.

dumbstruckk July 15 2011, 03:34:07 UTC

So I was looking through the fic seach on the rq comm and saw that someone was looking for the first part of this fic. And then I remember a sequel that was supposed to be coming and here I am. I can't believe I almost missed this. I loved every bit of this. Especially love the ending. Even if Jon isn't physically there, you were still able to make it end nicely, wrapping all the loose ends. Just love everything about the fic. :)

lovablelexie July 23 2011, 02:08:18 UTC

A little late but thank you so much for the review! I would have been sad if you missed the sequel too, lol!

I obviously had to have Lea and Dianna make up but I didn't want Jon to come between them and Lea having to chose between her girlfriend and her best friend. I'm glad you liked this because I had a lot of fun writing it.