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a story
May 15, 2010 02:17
So here's the rough version of that story I was talking about the other day.
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Just One Time
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mguibord
May 15 2010, 16:21:51 UTC
I like it- the ending takes me by surprise and gives that sad, wistful twist to all the thoughts he had while he was talking to Carol. Great job!
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susancolebank
May 16 2010, 04:31:06 UTC
I agree with Maurissa. Nicely done!
-S.
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