Cara is so squishy: "I… want to be strong for you."
Wonderful paragraph: "Kahlan had finally figured out why she was attracted to Cara; because Cara was, and had been, her mate, [...] because of Cara’s comforting, patient and often aggressively protective presence."
Haha-- Thanks! Glad you liked! Hope it was at least *partly* worth the wait? And, for the record? The "Pissed Off"? Was directed at me for taking so damn long. Traveling or no, I should have tried harder to update. I'll try and do better-- 10 days is not fair.
Hahaha, I hope the torture isn't too harsh for you? And, as the INFO-section reveals, they will get together eventually! They get closer with every update! =-) ((And thanks for the Hugs! But the "Pissed Off" was directed at me for taking 10 damn days to update! UNACCEPTABLE!))
Great update! uncertain!protective!loving!Cara is so adorable.
The legs and lips anatomy lesson had me reaching for a cold drink - whew!
Wonderful insight into the thoughts and feelings of both. Looking forward to the next bit. And I agree, you shouldn't be pissed off, unless NY is stressing you?
haha! Glad you're liking love!awkward-Cara -- she is pretty cute like this, isn't she? =-P
As for the "anatomy lesson"? ...where do I lie? NEVER. I don't lie. ALL TRUFAX. Sexy legs are sexy! (*ahem!*)
As for the "Pissed Off"? That's all directed at me (though being Pissed Off in general would make me fit in more with the natives here in Manhattan), I was pretty disgusted at myself when I realized I'd left you guys hanging for TEN WHOLE DAYS with no update... NOT OKAY! MUST TRY HARDER!
This series is amazing. Your characterization is so wonderful, not because its a perfect capture of who they were on the show but because you've had them grow and change while still remaining true to themselves. Also, unlike most fics where I presume things will work out, I'm on the edge of my seat wondering if they are going to get together or not. It isn't destiny here, their relationship progresses and evolves in a very natural way. Keep it up!
Glad you're liking my take on our two heroines! I'm glad to hear you think that, despite all the evolution I've made them go through, you still think they're "true to themselves"-- That is my biggest concern in all of this; if I lose the characters' voices, then I'm really not writing about them anymore, am I?
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Cara is so squishy: "I… want to be strong for you."
Wonderful paragraph: "Kahlan had finally figured out why she was attracted to Cara; because Cara was, and had been, her mate, [...] because of Cara’s comforting, patient and often aggressively protective presence."
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Hope it was at least *partly* worth the wait?
And, for the record? The "Pissed Off"? Was directed at me for taking so damn long. Traveling or no, I should have tried harder to update. I'll try and do better-- 10 days is not fair.
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(*mood: pissed off??? You shouldn´t be! Not for your wonderful writing! Hugs!*) :)
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((And thanks for the Hugs! But the "Pissed Off" was directed at me for taking 10 damn days to update! UNACCEPTABLE!))
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The legs and lips anatomy lesson had me reaching for a cold drink - whew!
Wonderful insight into the thoughts and feelings of both. Looking forward to the next bit. And I agree, you shouldn't be pissed off, unless NY is stressing you?
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As for the "anatomy lesson"? ...where do I lie? NEVER. I don't lie. ALL TRUFAX. Sexy legs are sexy!
(*ahem!*)
As for the "Pissed Off"? That's all directed at me (though being Pissed Off in general would make me fit in more with the natives here in Manhattan), I was pretty disgusted at myself when I realized I'd left you guys hanging for TEN WHOLE DAYS with no update... NOT OKAY! MUST TRY HARDER!
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I'm glad you're enjoying it so far-- and here's hoping you enjoy what is still to come! (*fingers crossed!*)
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