Fic: Privacy, A Series of Scenes

[angelicsinner]

Title: Privacy, A Series of Scenes
Author: AngelicSinner / VixenRaign
Pairing: Kahlan/Cara (pre-slash for now, but more than that soon), Richard/Kahlan, with appearances by Dahlia
Rating: G - R (PG-13 for now, maybe R later)
Warnings: Contains Femslash, and my rampant reinterpretation of how things may have gone after the end of Season 2. (

Comments

[yago25]

This story is very satisfying and ‘frustrating’ to read...

Why Richard was confessed that night?? and more important... why not in the Pillars??

Anyway... I love how you have them slowly growing closer, can't wait for them to tell each other their feelings *sigh*

Looking forward to your next update.

[angelicsinner]

I know! I know! It's driving everyone crazy... And I'm lazy... and I don't wanna get e-beat-up through the interwebs for my explanation for that because it'll probably get ugly... But It'll happen eventually. And then the story will be over because my status will become "AngelicSinner: iz ded. Killed to death by angry reederz." or something...

And the ~feelings? These two are so messed up emotionally? You know it'll be epic. And, you know, probably unnecessarily. 'Cause, lets face it-- these two are sooooo in lurve. =-P

[melanacious]

Yes! What a wonderful treat to find after a miserable evening of work

[angelicsinner]

Boo! Sucky work days suck! But I'm glad this cheered you up some! =-)
I'm happy you seem to be enjoying the complexity of the relationships here, with Cara and Kahlan and Richard, and lil'Lilly-- sometimes I feel like I must be driving my readers crazy? (In my head I see a dog chasing its tail 'cause their's a bone tied to it...)
Hope the next pieces to come continue to please!! =-D

[dragoon23]

I love the cara/kahlan banter, specially the 'getting kicked out because you called them cute' bit and everything after that XD

Am still a bit confused on the whole Richard Confession thing. Okay, so she confessed him during sex cuz they weren't really 'in love' love. Able to create Stone of Tears because their illusion of love was that strong. Fair enough. But how come he wasn't confessed when she went Con Dar on him? Was it because the Con Dar confession isn't as strong as the sex confession? Or Nicci diluted Con Dar confession's power when she confessed Kahlan?

pm sent ;)

[angelicsinner]

haha, glad you liked it! I worried it might be too comical to be believable for some, but *I* didn't think so... it was a judgement-call. So I went with it. Glad I did! =-)

As to the Richard-Confession thing; little to nothing in this chapter helps explain why he was (and then wasn't) spared from Confession. Though some of the things you've mentioned touch, graze, and/or even "hit the nail on the head"... but I won't say which is which... >.>

And I got your PM, and plan to start working on it any minute, then really hunker down when I get home from work! I'm excited by the option you picked, actually (*whisper*)-- it's a doozy! =-D

[atomiclava]

I'm always left in some kind of fluffy fog after reading these, like I've been dazed by some kind of unicorn-angel pixie dust. Can't say I mind.

Almost woke up my roommates by laughing when Cara kicked Kahlan out of bed. LOVED their banter.

I think this might be the first and only fic that has Cara sad that Richard and Kahlan aren't in love anymore. I like it because it shows that everything she's done for Kahlan was without any need or hope or design for anything more. It makes her seem so, i don't know, innocent? I like it, whatever it is.

[angelicsinner]

... "unicorn-angel pixie dust"-fluff-fog, you say? Is that like asbestos? =-P

Please apologize to said roommates on my behalf. Unless they ask too many questions. Then explain nothing. (It helps you appear more mysterious!)

Cara loves both Richard and Kahlan, she just doesn't recognize the emotion. She was happy for them because of how happy they made each other. She thought them the only ones worthy of each other. She does not think she herself is, so naturally she never thought she'd be anything more than she is (in fact, she never thought she'd get as close as she already has). Cara is devoted, deeply so. So, naturally, this all makes things quite "interesting"... >.>

[atomiclava]

asbestos is that stuff that makes your heart feel like its being snuggled by tiny baby bunnies, right? Then yes, exactly like asbestos :D

And tiny baby bunnies could take lessons in cuteness from Cara. When it comes to Kahlan, she's seriously the littlest spoon ever.

[angelicsinner]

Okay: A) I woke up with this email waiting for me, and my sleep-addled brain forgot that it was 6:00am and I laughed my ass off at your icon... There were promptly shouts to shut-up from across the house and I felt bad. And then, B) when I read your reply I d'aaawwww!'ed so loud at the mental image of a bunch of tine, baby bunnies snuggling up to a heart for warmth... yeah, more shouts. =-P

[vanchidel]

This is CUTE! :D (err... U gonna kick me out of... my office now

[greatshow]

I meant to give a review of this last night about how this update touches on our discussion about love and being in love, vanchidel.

[vanchidel]

Yeah, it really does ;) Now all this makes me wanna make an online survey or something to see if those are only my definitions or perhaps they have something to do with possible slight differences in meaning between English and Croatian words ;)

[angelicsinner]

I have no problem with being called "cute"-- I am not Mord'Sith... though sometimes I wish I were that badass... (*sigh