Larksong and Morningstar by Armariel

Oct 13, 2011 19:34

Author:Armariel
Title: Larksong and Morningstar
Rating:PG
Theme: Outside the box
Elements: light, aunt, stoic
Beta: None
Author's Notes: I never wrote the Bombadils before, so here they are...and with another on the way;)
Summary:A pregnant Goldberry gets a visit from her two younger sisters, who bring some rather disturbing news.
Word Count:3, ( Read more... )

2011, month: 2011 october, challenge: outside the box, october

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clodia_metelli October 17 2011, 09:47:23 UTC
That's a lovely tale! I adore Goldberry's sisters, what a delightful pair. Thank you!

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armarielrozita October 17 2011, 11:57:56 UTC
thank you Clodia! Glad you like my river-maidens, I'm rather fond of them myself.:):):)

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engarian October 17 2011, 13:12:21 UTC
A very cute view of characters that are rarely expanded upon. I enjoyed the addition of Goldberry's sisters to the mix.

- Erulisse (one L)

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armarielrozita October 17 2011, 21:00:47 UTC
Thanks Erulisse! This little tale kinda wrote itself after I got the idea established in my head. That sort of thing doesn't usually happen with me!:)

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curiouswombat October 17 2011, 16:46:59 UTC
That's lovely. The two sisters are a delight - and I do like the illustrations.

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armarielrozita October 17 2011, 21:02:10 UTC
Thank you, curiouswombat! I like the gals too, and the illustrations were fun to do once I found the right pictures!:D

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alfirineth October 18 2011, 03:47:16 UTC
What a delightful story, full of both the mundane and the myth. I thoroughly enjoyed my time reading it.

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armarielrozita October 18 2011, 04:01:23 UTC
Thank you Alfirineth--and I did enjoy writing it! It was one of those fun stories that come along once in a great while. "The mundane and the myth"--I like that. Thanks once more!:)

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shadowbrides October 18 2011, 16:23:24 UTC
I this was nice! Very nice how they don't appear to think like humans do exactly, that makes them more believable. Your take on the River-woman is interesting too. ^^

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armarielrozita October 18 2011, 20:45:56 UTC
Thank you shadowbrides! I'm so glad you found my little mermaids believable. The idea of having the Riverwoman play Lorelei just kind of sneaked up on me. Once it did, though, I had my story!:D

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