The Boys Who Lived by Nath

Mar 21, 2011 17:38

Author: Nath
Title: The Boys Who Lived
Rating: PG
Theme: Lion and Lamb
Elements: fearful/intrepid
Summary: Surviving isn't necessarily easy, two young men find
Word Count: 500

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challenge: lion & lamb, march, 2011, month: 2011 march

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blslarner March 21 2011, 22:27:48 UTC
At Nolondil no longer feels as if he were a failure and coward as compared to Estelmo. And I do like this interpretation of what might have happened. Well done, Nath!

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mrowe March 27 2011, 17:52:43 UTC
Thank you. They may both feel a bit better as a result of this meeting.

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ellynn_ithilwen March 21 2011, 22:38:55 UTC
Oh, Nolondil must really feel bad about all that. :(
Well done!

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mrowe March 27 2011, 17:53:17 UTC
He's not happy, no, but he may be able to lay some of his ghosts to rest now.

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lindahoyland March 22 2011, 07:15:00 UTC
Excellent!

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mrowe March 27 2011, 17:51:52 UTC
Thank you!

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foxrafer March 22 2011, 13:21:50 UTC
You show both sides of the coin, being brave and afraid, very well. Lovely piece.

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mrowe March 27 2011, 17:53:42 UTC
Thank you:)

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someplacetobe March 22 2011, 15:06:35 UTC
This captured the survivors, so very well.

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mrowe March 27 2011, 17:55:48 UTC
Thank you!

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