In which LotL tries to write a love poem as a man. In WWII. She is neither.

[lotl101]

So, this is a first draft of a poem for the amazing rthstewart's universe of Chronicles of Narnia (it's amazing, go read it) written by Tebbitt to ahem, Mrs Caspian. Or Mme Lambert. Or Mme Ellis. Take your pick how you want to call her, there are other options if those are too mundane for you. Disclaimer: I've neither written a love poem nor had any real

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[rthstewart]

OOPS. Just posted from the wrong LJ account leaving you wondering who who the heck was that crazy person? I deleted it and here is the proper me.

So, allow me to repeat,
THANK YOU!!!
THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!THANK YOU!!!

OK, loved the idea of trying to write WW2 poetry, as a man. HILARIOUS. but really OUR SOULS FLY TOGETHER WHEN WE CANNOT!!!!

[lotl101]

I take it you liked it? I wasn't sure exactly what you wanted so I just tried writing anything that came to mind. Is there anything that doesn't quite fit with what you wanted, or is anything missing? Let me know and I'll tweak. And thanks so much !

[autumnia]

Lovely bit of work from "Tebbitt". :-) And of course, he would choose to describe things in terms of flying.

[lotl101]

Thank you so much! I figured a grounded pilot would definitely think in terms of flight. One pure love is the only way to describe another love, I think.

[metonomia]

TEBBITT POETRY.

<333333333333

This is wonderful, and so metaphysical, which is PERFECT for darling Reg. The flying!

(also, hello!)

[lotl101]

Thanks! I really appreciate hearing back from people that I'm doing something right. :-)
(Hello back!)