The Lost Fic Battle 2009

[toestastegood]

Lost Fic Battle!!!!

I managed to get the prompt list in order much faster than I thought, so it's finally here!

Comments

Of Trespassing And Lacy Underthings, Boone/Charlie, searching through Shannon's luggage, PG-13

[slybrunette]

“Oh lacy,” Charlie says, a pair of hot pink very lacy, very skimpy panties held in between his index finger and thumb on either hand. “There’s no way these things are bloody comfortable

Re: Of Trespassing And Lacy Underthings, Boone/Charlie, searching through Shannon's luggage, PG-13

[slybrunette]

Hee, that's why I love comment fic battles, gives you so many ideas, lol. I'm glad you liked this! Thanks!

Re: Of Trespassing And Lacy Underthings, Boone/Charlie, searching through Shannon's luggage, PG-13

[janie_tangerine]

OMG! *squees* Wow, it was just so good! I think I'm in love with this one. The characterization was spot on perfect for the both of them, from the siblings coming as a package deal to Boone's cheeks to Charlie's attitude. The dialogue was so good! You have quite the Charlie voice. The making out part in the tent was just gold and ha, of course they steal the eyeliner! And the ending was as priceless as every comma here. I totally loved it! ♥

Jack/Sawyer; Scars

[siluria]

Jack's eyes drifted closed as Sawyer's kisses blazed a trail down his chest, he sighed deeply in contentment and pressed back into the soft mattress, willing for now to let Sawyer set the pace. He tried to suppress a shiver as soft fingers tickled his sides, blinking at the ceiling as Sawyer stilled. Jack looked down just as Sawyer reached out and traced the ragged edges of the scar that Juliet had tried her hardest to keep to a minimum, and he squirmed slightly under the attention. Sawyer's eyes raised to look into his

Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars

[siluria]

Almost ;) I may have to go look at Sawyer as a tattoo artist next ;)

Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars

[janie_tangerine]

Oh wow. This was just so good. It was so incredibly sensual but you made a great job with how they're feeling here, too.

Jack shifted and pulled Sawyer back up his body, moving so that Sawyer was pressed down into the bed, Jack's weight keeping him there. He pressed their mouths together, hard, his tongue pushing past Sawyer's lips to taste, wrenching a moan deep from within Sawyer's chest. He pulled back, smiling at the flush that had spread across Sawyer's face. Dipping his head he pressed a kiss to Sawyer's own scar, the edges of the bullet wound made ragged by Sawyer's own hands.

"This hurt more," Jack said. "Hurt because I nearly lost you."

*melts* ♥

Re: Too Good For You, Boone/Jack, Leave Him Alone, PG13

[janie_tangerine]

Aw, this was great! I really like the Jack/Shannon dynamic here. That's exactly the attitude she'd have, except that I guess she'd never show Boone. ;) And the part with Jack being around when Boone takes a swim was just... ♥ And no, Jack, don't keep away. Don't. ;)

Re: Too Good For You, Boone/Jack, Leave Him Alone, PG13

[siluria]

Best not to attempt to stay away I say, especially where wet skin is concerned!! ;)

Re: Too Good For You, Boone/Jack, Leave Him Alone, PG13

[missy_useless]

This is great! I love how you portrayed Shannon in this, that's definitely how she'd behave. And well, I definitely have a thing for Jack/Boone, so ... Thanks for writing this! And oh Jack, don't stay away from him! ;)

Unfinished, Charlie, the song(s) he never wrote, PG

[eponine119]

He was only twenty-eight. That was the thing that really got him. Washed-up has-been and not even thirty. Now he'd never see it

Re: Unfinished, Charlie, the song(s) he never wrote, PG

[siluria]

Monster ate the pilot would be awesome!!! But I actually love all those ideas :)

Re: Unfinished, Charlie, the song(s) he never wrote, PG

[eponine119]

Thank you! :)

Re: Unfinished, Charlie, the song(s) he never wrote, PG

[janie_tangerine]

Oh wow, that was just so good and touching. How do you do it in such short pieces? ;)

Like the music that lived inside him. The ones that existed only in little snippets, the ones that would grow up to be real some day but never got the chance. He planned to write pop hits and a symphony and a rock opera and a soundtrack and other forms not yet invented, that played in his head the way colors danced behind his eyelids late at night.

That one just really got me. Wow. I really loved this piece. And oh, the monster eating the pilot. That's exactly Charlie's description for it I think. ;)

The Something That Burns Inside You, Claire/Juliet, fever, pg-13

[slybrunette]

Claire comes back half-conscious, burning with a fever that just won’t break. The survivors, they’ve always seen her as their virgin mother, their symbol of hope, even just a little bit, so the accusations run high and fast. The others, they say, a dirty, bitter word, and all of a sudden she draws those looks again. Like she did this. Like this is her fault. Like she has never been, and never will be, one of them

Re: The Something That Burns Inside You, Claire/Juliet, fever, pg-13

[siluria]

I love how you have Sawyer standing up for Juliet's decision to help, i love that little tender moment at the end.

Re: The Something That Burns Inside You, Claire/Juliet, fever, pg-13

[slybrunette]

Hee, thanks! I'm glad you liked this!

Re: The Something That Burns Inside You, Claire/Juliet, fever, pg-13

[janie_tangerine]

Lovely! Great Juliet voice and I quote siluria above me, it's good to see Sawyer standing up for her. That first paragraph about Claire made so much sense, and of course it'd be Juliet to help her. Very nice indeed!