The Lost Fic Battle 2009

Jan 18, 2009 17:00

Lost Fic Battle!!!!

I managed to get the prompt list in order much faster than I thought, so it's finally here!

1077 Prompts Under the Cut! )

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Jack/Sawyer; Scars siluria January 18 2009, 20:59:31 UTC
Jack's eyes drifted closed as Sawyer's kisses blazed a trail down his chest, he sighed deeply in contentment and pressed back into the soft mattress, willing for now to let Sawyer set the pace. He tried to suppress a shiver as soft fingers tickled his sides, blinking at the ceiling as Sawyer stilled. Jack looked down just as Sawyer reached out and traced the ragged edges of the scar that Juliet had tried her hardest to keep to a minimum, and he squirmed slightly under the attention. Sawyer's eyes raised to look into his.

"Does it still hurt?" he asked, his accent deepened with desire.

Jack shook his head. "No."

"Bet you just hated to be one that needed fixing. Bet that's what really hurts," he said, before turning his attention back to the scar, his tongue flicking out to thoroughly taste as if he could take away the permanent reminder with the intimate touch.

Jack shifted and pulled Sawyer back up his body, moving so that Sawyer was pressed down into the bed, Jack's weight keeping him there. He pressed their mouths together, hard, his tongue pushing past Sawyer's lips to taste, wrenching a moan deep from within Sawyer's chest. He pulled back, smiling at the flush that had spread across Sawyer's face. Dipping his head he pressed a kiss to Sawyer's own scar, the edges of the bullet wound made ragged by Sawyer's own hands.

"This hurt more," Jack said. "Hurt because I nearly lost you."

Jack felt Sawyer's hand caress his head as he continued to press kisses to Sawyer's shoulder. "Didn't know you cared... then," Sawyer said.

"Didn't know I did either," Jack whispered. He rose to press a soft chaste kiss to Sawyer's lips, seemingly out of place considering their positions. He rolled his hips, pressing down onto Sawyer's body beneath and smirked at the reaction.

Sawyer's breath hitched. "Glad you worked it out."

"Me too," he said before he moved, this time he kissed a wet trail down Sawyer's body, paying as much attention to the smooth perfect skin as he did the scars that told their story across Sawyer's body.

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars siluria January 18 2009, 21:16:24 UTC
Almost ;) I may have to go look at Sawyer as a tattoo artist next ;)

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars janie_tangerine January 18 2009, 21:13:32 UTC
Oh wow. This was just so good. It was so incredibly sensual but you made a great job with how they're feeling here, too.

Jack shifted and pulled Sawyer back up his body, moving so that Sawyer was pressed down into the bed, Jack's weight keeping him there. He pressed their mouths together, hard, his tongue pushing past Sawyer's lips to taste, wrenching a moan deep from within Sawyer's chest. He pulled back, smiling at the flush that had spread across Sawyer's face. Dipping his head he pressed a kiss to Sawyer's own scar, the edges of the bullet wound made ragged by Sawyer's own hands.

"This hurt more," Jack said. "Hurt because I nearly lost you."

*melts* ♥

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars siluria January 18 2009, 21:18:03 UTC
Thank you hun! I'm glad you liked it :)

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars invisiblelove January 18 2009, 21:13:38 UTC
<333333333 MMM this was delicious. So intimate. Awesome :)

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars siluria January 18 2009, 21:18:24 UTC
Thank you xxxxxxx :)

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars slybrunette January 18 2009, 21:30:54 UTC
This is gorgeous and the dialogue is so perfect. Love it!

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars siluria January 18 2009, 22:13:49 UTC
Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it :)

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars missy_useless January 18 2009, 21:48:33 UTC
Love this! It's very sensual and sexy and still emotional. Great work!

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars siluria January 18 2009, 22:14:39 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm very glad you liked it! :)

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars siluria January 18 2009, 23:04:08 UTC
I am so sorry!!!!!! I'm not good with titles so I seem to completely forget to think of them - um, rating is R (to be safe) title 'Learning from hurt'

For the other fic - Jack/Sawyer, Sawyer is a tattoo artist. If you could please title that 'Inkworks' and rate it PG.

Sorry to be a bother, and thank you!

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars inthekeyofd January 19 2009, 14:53:58 UTC
THE SCAR ATTENTION..oh dear lord, seriously, that's FREAKIN' HOT..ding ding, you hit a kink button!!!!

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars siluria January 19 2009, 17:47:10 UTC
*pokes kink button* Got anymore hidden away that I can prod for you? ;) Glad you liked it hun xx

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Re: Jack/Sawyer; Scars gottalovev January 19 2009, 19:56:05 UTC
mm mmmmm mmmmm! I fully approve of scar licking, especially if it turns out as sweet as this! awesome!

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