Comments | lostgirlslair: Fic: Inside Out, Giles/Xander, R (FRM)

lostgirlslair

Fic: Inside Out, Giles/Xander, R (FRM)

Oct 13, 2007 17:26

Title: Inside Out (6 of 6)
Author: lostgirlslair
Fandom: BtVS
Pairing: Giles/Xander
Rating: R (FRM)

For full header, see Part One. Previous parts here.

( Inside Out, Part Six )

fic, btvs fic, inside out, giles/xander, rated:r/frm

Comments 15

altyronsmaker October 13 2007, 23:49:03 UTC

That was good stuff! Thanks for posting it and, well, whoever's birthday it was, they lucked out!

lostgirlslair October 15 2007, 22:55:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

soft_princess October 14 2007, 05:20:22 UTC

Oh god, this was awesome. All of it, it was amazing. Thank you so much, darling! :D YAY! (I so like the explanation of how Xander got to be part demon, it works)

*squishes*

(Can I have it for No One Knows, please?)

lostgirlslair October 15 2007, 23:03:27 UTC

I'm so very glad you liked it, sweetie!! ::squishes you like whoa:: I hope your birthday was fantastic! *G*

(Of course!)

drsquidlove October 14 2007, 06:46:15 UTC

"You and Giles kissed?" Willow's voice stopped him cold
I like that that's where she just can't help jumping in. I like Willow's role in all of this.

"I know. It's hard, huh? It's like suddenly your world is all upside down, but finally upside right and it's scary, 'cause it's different and it's new and there's this whole big new thing looming over you and you don't know how to make everything feel . . . well worn again."
That's fantastic. The most perfect description.

"Wow," Willow said, the sigh that followed kinda wistful. "Sounds, kinda intense, actually." Xander opened his eyes and saw not the 'you-did-something-cute' face, but a slightly worried one instead. I like that *that's* what makes it clear how serious it is ( ... )

lostgirlslair October 15 2007, 23:06:40 UTC

No, thank you!!! That is some truly awesome feedback! I'm so glad that you liked it and it hit your kink!

leiadiana October 14 2007, 08:11:35 UTC

Interesting story. I liked how you showed the progression of the relationships/events.

LeiaDianaMinerva

lostgirlslair October 15 2007, 23:08:06 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

schnuffie October 15 2007, 13:23:15 UTC

It was amazing. *woooooohooooo* My English *snief*, ok may I say it in German?

Es war wirklich unglaublich. Hin und hergerissen zwischen den Emotionen. Sensantionell! Wie im Grunde alle Deine Geschichten...
Ich mochte dieses Hingezogen-Sein zwischen Xander, der sich vollkommen überfordert fühlte und Giles, der derjenige sein "Mußte" der ein Stopschild aufstellte.

Ok Anya hat mir nur Leid getan bis zu dem Moment, in dem der Fluch neuerlich zur Sprache kam... Na so was!!! Na ja, verständlich, aber nicht net! *tsk*!

Hm, ich hätte gern noch viel mehr gelesen *seufz*! Aber es mußte wohl leider Schluss sein... Schade!

Und Giles Harry Potter auf´s Auuge zu drücken war wirklich witzig! *gggg*

´kay! That´s what I had to say *smirk*!!!! Couldn´t do it with "Amazing" *smirk*

Thank´s so much for sharing. Giles is the best ever... *;)))))*

lostgirlslair October 17 2007, 03:02:57 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!