Fic: Seeking Amy Pt. 2

[xakliaaeryn]

Title:  Seeking Amy Part 2
Author: xakliaaeryn
Beta: dreximgirl
Author's e-mail/website: frellmedead@hotmail.com
Summary:  Tragedy strikes John and Elizabeth at the peak of their happiness.
Type / Pairings: John/Elizabeth
Main characters: John, Elizabeth, Carson.
Rating: R for themes
Warnings:  Traumatic death and sensitive subject matter (Child fatality).

Comments

[xakliaaeryn]

Thank you very much. I was worried no-one would like it :-S
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[anuna_81]

You just ripped my heart out. I loved how you handled this, very delicate, with just enough detail to make it realistic. I could see and hear every conversation unfolding.

Thank you so much for sharing this!

[xakliaaeryn]

Sorry, didn't mean to :-S Thank you so much for reading and for the feedback, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :-)

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[syble4]

Wow, what a heartbreaking powerful story. It was beautifully written. I loved Tyla finding John in the gym, very emotional and yet believable.

[xakliaaeryn]

Thank you for the feedback, it means so much to me! I wrote the Teyla/John scene first around an image I had in my head along with the Rodney/John scene, and those were the 'easiest' to write (as easy as this fic was to write :-P). Thanks again for reading and giving feedback! :-)

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[ankareeda]

You did a good job, very tasteful way to handle this topic.