I Hate Know It All Chocolate

[lost_in_fiction]

Title: Reflection 
Author: Me!
Fandom: Tortal/Tamora Pierce/etc
Characters: Alanna, Thayet with mentions of Jon, George, Coram and Rispah
Pairings: Alanna/George, Thayet/Jon, Alanna/Jon, Coram/Rispah
Rating: E
Summary: Alanna and Thayet have a talk after she returns to the Bazhir.
A/N: Ok... I have a feeling the Coram/Rispah convo happens when George goes

Comments

[cutiebeaky]

I love it! Not quite as much as your Daine fic but I think thats merely because I prefer Daine and am more interested in reading about her. Keep writing.. :) x

[lost_in_fiction]

I prefer Daine to Alanna... but I did read her first... and I sympathise with her hair. Seriously hers sounds exactly like mine! XD

Glad you liked it anyway. ^-^

[believe_again]

I liked it. I especially liked lines such as 'her eyes lingered on the drink' and 'She thought it was only Coram who asked her that these days.'

Tiny crit for this line: “And he loved you." The way you've used the past tense make it sound like Jon doesn't love her anymore, which I'm sure he does. :)

Great job!

[lost_in_fiction]

Ah typo again! The s is right next to the d! lol Thank you for pointing it out. :D

I'm glad you liked it, and wow fave lines! :P

Thank you ^-^