Fic: Long Ago and Far Away, 7/12 (G)

[lorie945]

Comments

[slipperieslope]

I loved how the varied supposed sounds coming from Ralph's typewriter wove through the story reflecting poor Laurie's state of mind. Lovely.

[lorie945]

*grins to know that worked* Thank you so much, darling.

[aprilkat]

You are winding this tighter and tighter! Can't wait to see how you will resolve this.

[lorie945]

Me, too. Oops! *looks mysterious and knowing*

[lorie945]

It's very different from writing in the fantasy-universes I love. But I know you've dealt with the same topics in your work. Is that a new icon? Very nice and Valentine-y!

[hanarobi]

Do you have any idea how crazy it is making me to know that you are posting this and that I don't have time to read it?!?!?!?! I got to read only the first installment. And I skim the flist to make sure there are no crises (missing some, I am sure) but not having the time to read anything. So I know that this is here, but it is going to have to wait. And it is awful not getting to read it all and see how you handled the changes and to get to soak myself in this story.

I would beg you to stop posting until I can read it, but I think your other readers would send me nasty e-mails.

[lorie945]

It will still be around whenever you can get to it, you know, even if it's not for a year. I appreciate so much all your help with this. I've been going over your notes again, as I post, and I've made some additional changes. *smooches you*

[lorie945]

I'm trying to be very dignified, but the inner me is gleefully clapping my hands and bouncing on my chair, delighted that you're theorizing about the mystery, and that Ralph's awkward position came across, too. Thanks so much for your comment!