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lorib12

While I Was Away Chapter 2

Aug 15, 2011 22:54

A/N: So here is chapter 2. I had said that there would be 3-5 chapters…well, there’s definitely going to be more than 3 and possibly more than 5, so I won’t try to gauge the length anymore. I’m not sure I’m 100% satisfied with this chapter as I was hoping for a bit more dialogue but at the same time, I think the inner thoughts of both House and ( Read more... )

while i was away, h/w, slash

Comments 8

damigella_314 August 16 2011, 04:45:16 UTC

Good to know this will be longer than expected, and I'm looking forward to getting to know Andrew better. I reallylike this fic so far.
So far, so very good - I didn't expect Chase as Cuddy's successor.
I friended you and hope you don't mind.

lorib12 August 16 2011, 22:39:03 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying this fic and yes you will learn more about Andrew in the next chap...hopefully you'll like how it goes. Thanks so much for the wonderful comment and I friended you back :)

chocolate_frapp August 16 2011, 06:23:21 UTC

this is very well-written. Poor House. i want to hug him.

lorib12 August 16 2011, 22:41:16 UTC

Yeah, House does need a hug :( But Wilson is very worried about House's true motivation and he doesn't want to give up something that he thinks is good for House's crazyness. We'll see if House can change his mind ;) Thanks so much for commenting, I really appreciate it!

lifes_own_light August 16 2011, 15:50:12 UTC

Oh, Wilson, you dolt! *shakes head* He's going to be really stupid about this, isn't he? Glad House hasn't given up (I hope), even when Wilson hurt him so badly. I eagerly await the next installment.

One small con-crit: not a single sole to tend to his worldly possessions, should be soul.

lorib12 August 16 2011, 22:43:56 UTC

Thanks, no matter how many times I re-read, I always miss something or somethings...I made the change :) Yeah Wilson is really worried about House's true motivations here, but I can't see House ever giving up on Wilson, we'll see if Wilson let's him back in ;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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lorib12 August 16 2011, 22:48:36 UTC

Wilson is most certainly scared. He finally came to terms with who he is and has found some normalcy with Andrew; something he'd never have with House. The question is: Is normalcy enough...I suspect that in the big picture; House isn't the only one who doesn't like boring ;) I'm so glad you're reading this and enjoying it...I hope I don't dissapoint :)

brindlewolf August 17 2011, 02:20:20 UTC

I really like this. Oddly enough - though I am a true hilson shipper and I LOVE LOVE LOVE House - I can really see why Wilson doesn't trust House anymore. That darn season 7 messing with my mind and giving me doubts - lol. Looking forward to insight into Andrew, and House redeeming himself somehow. Please update soon! <3