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DW Fic: A Different Sort of Family Reunion (4/5)

Apr 29, 2010 22:09

Title: A Different Sort of Family Reunion (4/5)
Author: lorelaisquared
Betas: frakup, gioiamia
Rating: PG
Characters: Rose, Ten, Jenny
Word Count: 1,289
Summary: The Doctor and Rose encounter someone from the Doctor's past. Can they unravel the mystery that surrounds her in time to keep her safe?

Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 |

( A Different Sort of Family Reunion: Chapter 4 )

rose, ten, auctionfic, fic, dwfic, doctor who, auction, rating: pg

Comments 9

jenny_1260 April 30 2010, 06:01:37 UTC

Just a quiet stalker passing by :P

I have to say, naming Jenny's daughter Donna has got to be the most AWESOME-est perfect thing ever and you have totally just made my day! XD

lorelaisquared May 1 2010, 06:19:39 UTC

Awwww thank you so much for dropping by Jenny!

I'm so glad you like Jenny's name choice. I quite liked the tie in to Donna myself. I'm so delighted that little tidbit made your day! Thank you so much for reading.

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lorelaisquared May 1 2010, 06:21:22 UTC

*giggle* I take it you liked this chapter?

I have to admit it's my fav even though it's so short - It's just so light and fluffy and happy. I love the idea of these three as a family unit with the little babes! :)

Thanks for reading!

PS - your icon is cracking me up!

foxyhlc April 30 2010, 12:09:24 UTC

How fantastic Donna is ginger and they're kind of human which makes them more Rose's grandkids! How beautiful is this?
"the Doctor gently attached a monitor to Jenny's abdomen and instantly the swish of heartbeats filled the air.

All three of them held their breath as they listened."

And this made me laugh inappropriately in the office ""Well, it is exceptional hair. But it would be even better if it were ginger."" (no I couldn't wait till I finished work to read this.

And the Doctor is happy! I love it when the Doctor is happy.

And - oh - shutting up now.

lorelaisquared May 1 2010, 06:24:34 UTC

Awwww I'm so so glad that you liked how this chapter played out. They are kind of human aren't they? And in my head they are totally Rose's grandkids - the details are all just technicalities.

Aww yes, that scene was very sweet wasn't it? A very "family moment"

HAHAHA I laughed when I wrote that line. I love it when the Doctor gets all OTP about his hair.

Yes the Doctor happy is one of my most favourite things.

LOL your comments are a delight. Thanks so much for reading (and at work no less!) I hope you enjoy the final installment.

sunnytyler001 April 30 2010, 17:21:06 UTC

Lovely :D

lorelaisquared May 1 2010, 06:25:06 UTC

THANK YOU! :)

wiggiemomsi April 30 2010, 23:58:29 UTC

Awwww, Jenny named the baby girl Donna! *melts*

But this bit was the funniest:

"I'd like to name him after his father, Valrzghzubhmn."

*Sporfle!*

lorelaisquared May 1 2010, 06:28:20 UTC

Yes! She did. Donna is now a legacy in the Doctor/Tyler family.

*snort* HA what's funnier is that originally his name was "Michael" and I was talking to a friend and I was like, "But it's such a boring name, I need something more alien sounding", so she suggested Val since it's similar to the planet name, and I added a bunch of random characters because I figured that an unpronounceable name was funnier... (Seriously, try to say it out loud. I'm pretty sure it's impossible.)