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DW Fic: Observational Legacy (1/1)

Apr 19, 2010 01:35

Title: Observational Legacy (1/1)
Author: lorelaisquared
Rating: G
Characters: Nine, Ten, Eleven, Amelia Pond, mentions of Donna Noble and Rose Tyler
Word Count: 1977
Beta: This fic is unbetaed so if you do see any errors, please feel free to PM me so I can fix them.
SPOILER WARNING: Contains explicit spoliers up to and including The Eleventh Hour
Summary: What ( Read more... )

spoilers, fandom, fic, dwfic, rating: g, doctor who

Comments 40

danaems April 19 2010, 18:35:35 UTC

Awesome!! Hehe So glad you decided to write this. Really brilliant sequel fic to one of the best Ten tributes I have ever watched. You wrote two of my favorite Doctors amazingly. I had to laugh to myself quietly because I am in class. Otherwise I would be laughing even harder. Loved the banana line.

lorelaisquared April 20 2010, 02:12:40 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad I decided to write it too. It was so much fun. I've never giggled so much at my own writing before. And THAT VIDEO IS MADE OF ALL KINDS OF WIN!!!!! I couldn't just let this idea go even though I have other fic obligations that I technically should have been working on instead. But I didn't want to wait on this one. The idea was just too fun.

I'm so glad you liked these two. I don't write Nine much so I was quite nervous about him (especially since this wasn't betaed). I'm glad it worked.

Hehehe I'm glad it made you laugh, even if you had to laugh quietly.

♥ Thank you for reading.

(PS - I LOVE your icon. Very fitting)

danaems April 21 2010, 02:42:44 UTC

That's always awesome. I know!! Loved it! Some ideas are too fun not to do. Putting them off is impossible. Even though other things have to be put off. :)

Yeah, was in Physics class. Fun... :P Wish Ten was my teacher.

(Thanks! I miss him so much. I made the icon myself. Thought of Sarah Jane saying "No one will ever forget you". So true.)

imzadimylove April 20 2010, 00:37:09 UTC

This was so great! I was laughing also! And I did find myself screaming at the tv through the entire food bit - bananas! He likes bananas! The cats thought I was mad - and I was.

You handled the bit with Rose very nicely - just the right touch. And the bickering betw. Nine & Ten - I could see this entire scene in my head. Well done : )

lorelaisquared April 20 2010, 02:14:37 UTC

Yay I'm so glad it made you laugh. Hehehe he totally should have asked for bananas - would have saved a whole mess of things. LOL I can only imagine the looks you got from your cats!

I'm glad you liked the Rose bit. That's one of my favourites and the bickering between nine and ten was comically fun. They are made of win together aren't they?

emraldeyedauter April 20 2010, 07:45:03 UTC

It is quite the legacy we've left, isn't it?"

This line sums up Doctor Who exactly. From the first right through to the current Doctor they have all left something of themselves in our minds and hearts.

This was a wonderful piece and I like the thought of them all being together especially Nine and Ten.

The past few months had been filled with too much loneliness and sorrow; it was time he learned to enjoy life again.

Oh I hope so, I really do. Thanks so much for writing this.

lorelaisquared April 22 2010, 05:52:56 UTC

This line sums up Doctor Who exactly. From the first right through to the current Doctor they have all left something of themselves in our minds and hearts.

Awww thank you. It does kind of sum it all up doesn't it? I wasn't really intending to go there when I first started writing this, but then as it came together the idea of legacy just felt right. Nine and Ten and every other Doctor have left their legacy and maybe that's part of why people seem to see so much of the other Doctors in Eleven?

I'm so glad you liked this piece. I also just love the idea of them all being together - I've always loved different Doctors meeting each other so the moment I read this "theory" I glommed onto it and knew I just had to write about it!!!!

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed!

lucyd3 April 20 2010, 16:41:30 UTC

Great idea, very funny! Now we need a commentary on the next 2 episodes - perhaps with some other Doctors joining in....

lorelaisquared April 22 2010, 06:06:19 UTC

Hehehehehe! Hmmmm I've had a few people request this. I just might have to think about it! :) Thanks for reading - glad you like it, thought the premise is not my own - it came from di_br's video called Tenth Doctor - "The Musical". If you haven't seen it yet you totally should, it's awesome.

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

di_br April 21 2010, 16:59:12 UTC

OMG I'm so sorry it took me so long to write a reply, but I was just too busy squeeing like a crazy person at it!!!
I absolutely LOOOVED it! It just makes the post-regeneration theory all the more real in my head.
You wrote Nine and Ten perfectly! While it would have been logical for the other Doctors to have been there, I much prefered you leaving just Nine and Ten there. Maybe I'm saying that 'cause they're the only ones I've actually seen (though I'm almost done watching One's first season), but I really liked reading them both together.

I loved how you wrote the Rose bit! For a moment I feared they'd start bickering over her, but I loved the way you wrote them. It makes much more sense and it's lovely!

I could go on and on about this, but I hope you realize I'll be forever wishing you'll write one of these for each episode. :D I'd love to know Nine and Ten's opinions on colorful Daleks. ;)

lorelaisquared April 22 2010, 06:22:55 UTC

OMG you just completely made my day with this amazing review. You don't even know. ♥ THANK YOU.

I'm so glad it made you squee since your video filled me with so much squee I can't stand it. It's really amazing.

Ha! Well, I've only seen Nine and Ten myself so it made sense to me to just stick with them - trying other Doctors at this point would probably prove disastrous. Plus Nine and Ten bickering was just too much fun. I heard them in my head as soon as I finished watching your video the first time.

I was going to avoid Rose in this but then it just came out the way it did and I loved it instantly so she stayed! I'm glad so many people liked that part.

I could go on and on about this, but I hope you realize I'll be forever wishing you'll write one of these for each episode. :D I'd love to know Nine and Ten's opinions on colorful Daleks. ;)Awwwww thank you. I absolutely love hearing your comments. You are not the only one who has requested this. I just might have to give this some thought. I'm starting to toy with the idea of ( ... )