The sentence challenge

[loracj]

Thanks to ctoan for being the ringmistress of this event.

This is written for mel39.
I couldn't very well ask Mel to beta her own story, now could I, never mind the fact that she's a traveling gal, so........
A HUMONGOUS THANK YOU to 60schic for her invaluable beta skills and helpful suggestions, including the title. It's a better story because of her.

Comments

[katwoman76]

This was great.
Ryan is such a great big brother.

[loracj]

Thanks, Kat. I'm sure he would have been a great big brother in the future - with Kaitlyn and Sophie....and an uncle to Seth and Summer's kids too.

[marcopolo8170]

This was wonderful. I love the fact that Ryan and Kaitlyn formed the brother and sister bond after Marrissa died.

[loracj]

We did see a little of it, but I think it would have been much more had they let it.
Glad you enjoyed.

[finlee]

I really love the story! Ryan is a great big brother!

[loracj]

Hee. I just know he would be. Thanks.

[helen_c]

Awwwwwwwww. I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy now. I love the bond Kaitlin and Ryan formed after Marissa's death, so thank you for exploring it further, here... :)

[loracj]

I'm all about the warm and fuzzy, you know that.
I wish we could have expanded that Kaitlyn Ryan scene. I too loved their interaction.

[fredsmith518]

and setting up her new baby clothing line with Julie’s help what a good idea

very much enjoyed the beach descriptions and the Katy bonding, another very good idea

[loracj]

Thanks, Fred. I struggled with the sentence until just the other day, and then it poured out of me...