Got a Light - Chapter 22

[loracj]

I know - You've forgotten all about this story. Well, I know some of you haven't, as I've been nudged on more than one occasion. I looked back and horrors! it's been since October since I've visited this world.

Thanks to my bestest beta mel39 for her keen eye as always.

A special thanks to 60schic for her counsel and assistance on all fronts....without her

Comments

[katwoman76]

I'm still frustrated with the both of them. But I do have hope. An I'm glad to see this story back.

[loracj]

They are frustrating, I know. But it's me writing them, so you are correct in having hope for an eventual resolution.

[ryanforever]

Oh how I've missed this story. These two silly fools. I guess at least Ryan had the gumption to call her so that's a start. But I'm scared that what she's going to say to him will have him running for cover.

[loracj]

It will be an interesting conversation - that I can promise.

[fredsmith518]

ha dto skim becaus e was writing an dthen the othre half acme home an dgave me a galss of wine an dthis is my typing now!

will com eback when awake/sober - but I like dwhta I read:)

[smc36]

hee- drunk fred is funny.
*waves hello again at Frankie*
laughs a little more as I try to figure out what fred is saying.

[loracj]

*Frankie waving back*

Drunk Fred is indecipherable. :D

[loracj]

*giggling*

I think you liked it, right?

[finlee]

Frankie's back..

[loracj]

Yep. Took her a while but she's back.
BTW, have you endured any tornado warnings yet? I saw on the news that TX is getting its share.

[finlee]

No tornado watches but a couple "dangerous storm" warnings. Fortunately the storms were as bad as they were elsewhere but there was hail!

[60schic]

You give me too much credit; I was just a sounding board, throwing ideas at you to see which one might stick. You had that burning to get back to this story (as do we) because you need to see it resolved!

I think you got just the right tone of bewilderment for Frankie, wondering where the hell it had all gone wrong. Good work on the grocery store scene. I think she was remarkable restrained with just that good cry afterwards. I'd of been throwing things....breakable things. I find myself taking her side in this, possibly b/c it was Ryan who first jumped to conclusions without asking her about the whole LA thing. Ryan Atwood? Jumping to conclusions? What a concept! Me, too invested? Now why ever would you think that?

Can't wait for what comes next *walks away whistling*

[loracj]

I think I take her side too - but only because I want her to be happy, and I don't blame her for being pissed, albeit misinformed. But then again, so is he, right?

You gave me the push in the right direction, and without it, I'd still be playing video games. Not that I won't do that again, but at least it's something.