Aloha, Jersey

Mar 08, 2011 18:43


Steve rested his shoulder against the doorway of Danny's office and grinned. Danny was hair-deep in paperwork, stacks of which littered his desk and almost obscured him from Steve's sight.

"Type of expenditure," Danny muttered to himself, but loud enough for anyone passing by to hear. "Hand grenades. Reason for expenditure. My partner is a loon."

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mild kink, pwp, rating: nc-17, humor

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indigocat March 9 2011, 00:33:49 UTC
Favorite line is the very last. Danny will be on a rant for sure.

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longboard_chris March 9 2011, 00:37:55 UTC
Of course. Because Danny's rants are never-ending. And that's why we, and Steve, love him.

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michele659 March 9 2011, 04:55:28 UTC
This was so funny! Steve will do anything to make sure Danny knows he's in the best possible place with the best possible lover!
I really liked the way Steve memorized the list,lol in order to do that.
Of course,all he really had to do was take Danny to bed to show him how good he has it! :)

I loved the last line-yes,Danny will be on a rant for a long time when he hears where New Jersey is on the list.
He'll be convinced it's a conspiracy!

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longboard_chris March 9 2011, 11:32:39 UTC
The only way to fight Danny's exaggerations (or outright lies) is for Steve to act like a good attorney. I watch too many procedurals, police and medical . :)

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shinysylver March 9 2011, 05:04:28 UTC
I thought of them when I saw that survey too. Cute fic. :)

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longboard_chris March 9 2011, 11:20:55 UTC
The story just spilled out during primetime TV Monday night.

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americandirrty March 9 2011, 05:38:20 UTC
This is perfect, I love it!

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longboard_chris March 9 2011, 11:22:31 UTC
Thank you very much.

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bi_nocturnal_g March 9 2011, 10:23:19 UTC
Love it. And it's so Steve to have memorized the list.

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longboard_chris March 9 2011, 11:34:51 UTC
Steve had to do something after Danny accused Steve of NOT taking him surfing. Extreme measures were called for.

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