Comments | lonely_heartz: Only Mine.

lonely_heartz

Only Mine.

Mar 07, 2009 17:17

Title: Only Mine.
Chapter: One-shot.
Author: lonely_heartz
Fandom: Johnny’s Entertainment.
Pairing: Takida, Jinda.
Genre: Romance, Fluff.
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don’t own them.
Summary: Takizawa Hideaki like you've never seen before. Takizawa Hideaki's ex, Yamashita Tomohisa, tries his best to get in the way of Takki's relationship with Ueda Tatsuya. ( Read more... )

*takida, *jinda

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creamy_amande March 8 2009, 00:37:35 UTC

Oh god you did it!
Hva to read this one then!
I'll edit right after!

Lol...so Takki likes to say rude words all the time? It's a shame though, I truly would adore this turning into a JinDa one..should see me coming with this right? It was really funny, and Ueda is a sadist we know, but we don't see it here..well no enough time as it was a bit much about how Takki loves Ueda...yeah he's scary in love!

lonely_heartz March 8 2009, 04:59:38 UTC

Hehehe.. Regarding Takki, I did say that it's the sort of Takki that no one's seen before! Hehehehehe LOL!! =D ( ... )

lonely_heartz March 8 2009, 05:02:40 UTC

Oops, instead of:
*when he runs around naked in the show.

I actually meant:
*when he runs around HALF-naked in the show.
Hehehe everyone's in love with a shirtless Tacchan! ^^

oxokawaiiox March 8 2009, 01:16:34 UTC

lol this was funny! wow, takki should stop being so violent and beating people to the bloody pulp xD
awehh this fic is just great!!
love it!

thanks for sharing ^^

lonely_heartz March 8 2009, 05:06:01 UTC

Hehehe.. indeed, my first impression was that it's amusing.

Hehehehe.. I know eh.. I like used "beating people to a bloody pulp" 3 times? Or more? No, just 3? Ahahaha.

Thanks, hun! ^^

You too! When you get the time.. write more PIDA!!!! ^^
I'll finish my Pida's after my finals.. which means, April! LOL!! ^^

I have 5 research papers due in the next 2 1/2 weeks so I most likely won't have time to write much... not until APRIL anyway. =)

oxokawaiiox March 8 2009, 06:05:36 UTC

LOL never knew that Takki could be so possessive! haha I'm so used to Ryo being so violent -but that's just me since I'm used to reading RyoDa..
&nd no prob, your fics are always so great its hard to not love them!!

yes! I definately need to write more PiDa...more like start writing the pair! EHHHHHH?! long wait again ?! D8. lol I understand! school comes first ne?
ganbatte ne!

have fun with your 5 research papers xD kidding love you nee-chan~!

lonely_heartz March 8 2009, 06:21:41 UTC

Hehehehe regarding Takida & Ryoda, same here! I think that I've gotten so used to Ryo ( ... )

chika1611 March 8 2009, 03:51:03 UTC

Whew... TakkiDa. I never thought about this pairing before but now... I think they're cute, though quite scary. Lol! :D

lonely_heartz March 8 2009, 05:10:50 UTC

Hehe.. indeed, I think that Takida is cute too! ^^
I mean two hot people together just equates to greatness! LOL!! =)

Oh yeah, the love at the end's scary because (like I told amandine before.. it's like this.. hehe):

"Actually, I was soooo close to turning it into a Jinda.. then, I changed my mind. LOL!! That's why the ending is sooo dramatic..with Takki's love being sooo scary.. I had to do it that way, in order to redeem himself from being prone to Tomohisa's advancements. Hehe. ^^"

If I didn't do it the scary way.. most likely, I'd have turned it into a Jinda by the end of it. LOL!! ^^

chika1611 March 8 2009, 05:39:50 UTC

Lol, but I prefer RyoDa more than any pairing! *keep flails* XDDD

lonely_heartz March 8 2009, 05:47:32 UTC

Indeed! Same here! Ryoda will always be my main OTP as well! =) Because no pairing can beat the power of RYODA! ^^

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resha_ueda March 8 2009, 08:22:07 UTC

Yey for Ueda being paired up with more people!!!
a PLUS FACTOR COZ HE'S PAIRED WITH A SENPAI
*is still waiting for someone to write okada x ueda*

MUCH LOVE ON YOU~
♥

lonely_heartz March 8 2009, 09:08:28 UTC

Hehehehe ^^ I've always wanted to pair Tacchan up with Takki!

Thank you, resha!

Much love on you too! =)

Btw, who's Okada?!
Also, you write really good Ohkuda!
Tacchon's soooo hot~~~ wowzers. ^^

resha_ueda March 8 2009, 12:36:24 UTC

Okada Junichi from V6~
(the guy from the VTR during his SCP episode)
HE IS ONE HOT SENPAI.

i shall write them sooner or later~

♥

lonely_heartz March 8 2009, 23:30:36 UTC

Oooh seriously?!
Alright, I'll check him out then! Hehehe ^^

Yes, please do write Okada!
It'd be sooooo interesting! ^^
Thanks, resha! =)

loonykatt March 16 2009, 07:54:19 UTC

haha.. tat's fresh.. we never really heard takki swear before.. he's quite gentle with his speech.. know nothing off screen of cos.. LOL.. normally even when tsubasa teased him, he'll just laugh it off.. or act angry .. fufufu.. but I like this takida, haha.. poor uebo, guess he's always will in possessive bfs' hands ne? cant blame us though, he's too much a hime to us.. LMAO

lonely_heartz March 16 2009, 14:12:12 UTC

hehehe.. indeed, i always thought of Tacchan as a hime. LOL!! ^^

Oh my goodness! Thank youuuu so much for your wonderful feedback! I'll definitely use this new knowledge to make more accurate Takida fics in the future! Hehehehe.. you're the only one I've come across so far.. who knows Takki/Tsuba real well. Youtube doesn't really help because I can't find subbed interviews properly on there.

Alright, so.. what I'm taking away with this is he's gentle, laughs when teased/act angry...so he's a bit playful then, eh? Is he somewhat like Jin then?

Anyways, thank you so much for your wonderful feedback. Now, at least, I have some grounds on how to portray him better! ^^