Comments | lomonaaeren: [Advent fics]: Harry/Draco, Mighty Have Fallen, PG-13

lomonaaeren

[Advent fics]: Harry/Draco, Mighty Have Fallen, PG-13

Dec 05, 2013 15:31

Title: Mighty Have Fallen
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and associates own these characters. I am writing this story for fun and not profit.
Pairings: Harry/Draco pre-slash
Warnings: Issues of disability, angst, gore, Draco being a bastard
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 3000
Summary: When he heard Harry Potter had been blinded, Draco knew he had to see him. ( Read more... )

rated pg or pg-13, advent fics, angst, pre-slash, pov: draco, bloodstone potions series, one-shots, disabled!harry

Comments 35

phonixfeder December 5 2013, 20:47:22 UTC

Great Story.

It reminds me of Hymn to Color. But I think this story is better. Its a better end.

Thank you!

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:20:00 UTC

Thanks!

Yeah, I like this one better, too.

calmnla December 5 2013, 21:12:39 UTC

Oh, I like this very much. Draco doesn't understand everything but he is slowly figuring it out. Hooray for an ending that makes me hope for sporadic sequels! Hint hint. :-)

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:20:22 UTC

Thank you!

Lots of people seem to want a sequel to this one. It's so gory and dark I'm a bit surprised, but.

eelegantlyeevil December 5 2013, 21:22:21 UTC

You have to come back to this one please.

I would love to see how things progress during the years that Draco develops and brews the potion and how their relationship progresses (or not) and then what happens after Harry takes the potion.

How completely Slytherin that Draco would want to brew the potion for his own self interest -- getting his "enemy" back. :)

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:20:44 UTC

Thank you!

Well, we'll see. I don't know if I could sustain the intensity in a longer story, though.

himitsu_knh December 5 2013, 21:36:11 UTC

Such a beautiful story, I like it so much. I like the way Draco's thinking evolves, from "I'm gloating like crazy" to "I'm willing to spend years working on a Dark Arts potion just to have him back (as the rival he was)" Rival, or maybe not? Who knows.
And it's so sad that Harry lost his spark (completely understandable, that), it breaks my heart. Thanks Merlin Draco is full of surprises (and resources).

Any chance you'll be making a sequel/series out of this idea?

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:21:15 UTC

Thank you!

Harry losing his spark is Draco's main motivation for even offering to brew the potion. There are some things that are Just Wrong to this Draco.

I have no idea, at this point.

lyonessheart December 5 2013, 22:20:56 UTC

oh I would love to see how their relationship evolves from there.

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:21:27 UTC

It would be mostly Draco pushing it along.