Comments | lomonaaeren: [Advent fics]: Harry/Draco, Mighty Have Fallen, PG-13

lomonaaeren

[Advent fics]: Harry/Draco, Mighty Have Fallen, PG-13

Dec 05, 2013 15:31

Title: Mighty Have Fallen
Disclaimer: J. K. Rowling and associates own these characters. I am writing this story for fun and not profit.
Pairings: Harry/Draco pre-slash
Warnings: Issues of disability, angst, gore, Draco being a bastard
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 3000
Summary: When he heard Harry Potter had been blinded, Draco knew he had to see him. ( Read more... )

rated pg or pg-13, advent fics, angst, pre-slash, pov: draco, bloodstone potions series, one-shots, disabled!harry

Comments 35

thrilladdict December 5 2013, 23:00:40 UTC

Oh my God. Thank you! I love you, love you, love you *goes fangirl over you*. I really like how dark it was at the beginning and that you didn't gloss over Draco 's ruthlessness. I wasn't expecting the story to develop so strongly in the way it did, which made it all for the best. I'm tearing up a bit. Thanks!

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:22:23 UTC

Thank you! And thanks for the great prompt. I don't think I would have tried to take Draco in a different direction than just offering help from the beginning if you hadn't specified gloating.

anonymous December 5 2013, 23:28:20 UTC

Wonderful! I'd love to read the rest of this story?! Pretty please?

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:22:38 UTC

We'll see if there's a rest.

abordantoinette December 5 2013, 23:37:31 UTC

omg i'm a bastard, too. Just the summary had me LOLing. I love a scheming Draco. I've been reading tons of your fics, btw, and they've been making me so happy. i dont comment as much as i'd like, because i mostly read at work, and the computers here suck and make things wonky.

Anyhow, I love your work. Thank you so much for sharing it <3

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:23:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that you're still enjoying it.

And this Draco...he seems to appeal to a lot more people than I thought he would!

vaysh December 5 2013, 23:38:05 UTC

Mighty Have Fallen
It is very hard to see Harry so broken. But you captured very well Draco's obsession with Harry Potter, that mix of hatred and attraction, sexual and other. I, too, would love to see a sequel of this story.

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:24:15 UTC

Thank you!

This is the most requests I've had for the sequel to a one-shot, ever. I'll have to see what I can do about that.

vaysh December 8 2013, 10:52:50 UTC

As you said in other replies, it would be hard to keep the intensity of this. But I'd love to read another one-shot in this universe. It does not have to be after Harry can see again, but I'd love a moment of those years when Draco is working on the potion, and Harry getting comfortable/familiar to being blind. And I for one would not want Draco to undergo a personality transformation. It is this dynamic - he needs Harry to see his punches coming - that makes this one-shot so powerful in my view.

ldydark1 December 6 2013, 00:25:03 UTC

Oh, this is WONDERFUL! So real. I loved the descriptions of Harry, how he looked, his fake eyes,
his shirt on inside out. I loved how Draco showed up to mock, and ended up deciding to help Harry.
I would Love to see you (pun intended), Please, Please, Please write a Sequel to this story.
I would read every word. Thank you for a great Advent fiction!

lomonaaeren December 7 2013, 23:24:43 UTC

Thank you!

We'll see. I don't know if I could do an extended story and keep the intensity. Maybe another one-shot, if I decide on one.