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lomonaaeren

Chapter Four of 'Flare'- Walk the Path

Jul 22, 2011 12:07

humor, novel-length, harry/draco, angst, creature!fic, auror!fic, flare, rated r or nc-17, pov: harry, romance, ewe, ron/hermione

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enamoril July 22 2011, 20:01:03 UTC

It is confirmed; Malfoy definitely has a wings fetish xD

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:04:15 UTC

Oh, yes, Harry thinks so.

piratesmile331 July 22 2011, 22:21:41 UTC

YAY for Harry allowing himself to have a bit of fun. I suspect (and hope) it's going to end up being more than that, though.

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:04:25 UTC

Well, we'll have to see in the next chapter.

ldydark1 July 22 2011, 23:31:25 UTC

OH Heck!! Why did you end here??? I think Harry is
going to get more from Draco than he anticipated.
Great chapter, unusal concept.

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:05:40 UTC

Yes, I think so, too. The problem is that Harry may not let what he gets last more than a day.

rhiannon_flying July 23 2011, 00:30:49 UTC

Okay first of all, you are a very cruel person to stop there. I'm just sayin.

Secondly, that went a lot faster than I expected it would. Of course, I have the feeling it means that Harry is just going to act like more of a prat later, but we can't have everything.

It seems like he {Harry} doesn't get a lot of positive reinforcement in his life.. Or if he does, it comes from directions he doesn't feel he can trust.

And Draco, for having just noticed how gorgeous Harry is and that he wants him, he certainly seems to have paid enough attention, {scars} hasn't he?

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:06:30 UTC

He may act like a prat if it turns out that Draco really is attracted to nothing but his wings, of course.

Huh, that's interesting that you think of Harry as someone who doesn't get positive reinforcement. Why? He does have a close friendship with Ron and he's not as paranoid about Healers/people hurting him as in some of my other stories.

rhiannon_flying July 23 2011, 04:10:28 UTC

Just the way he seems to think about himself. Most of it seems negative to me. Like his superiors treat him as more of a problem, {refusing to return to the ministry, in the first chapter, the way his boss talked to him, the way he compares himself to Draco..} it just seems a little more negative than I'd expect from someone with more support.

vavikingwoman July 23 2011, 01:22:26 UTC

I love the description of Draco's ability to be at home anywhere. That was just so...perfect to understand the character. Than at the end, Harry's recklessness raising its ugly head....priceless. I can hardly wait until the next chapter.

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:06:53 UTC

Thank you!

Well, in this case, I think Draco would decide that Harry's recklessness is exactly what he wants. :)