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lomonaaeren

Chapter Four of 'Flare'- Walk the Path

Jul 22, 2011 12:07

humor, novel-length, harry/draco, angst, creature!fic, auror!fic, flare, rated r or nc-17, pov: harry, romance, ewe, ron/hermione

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helenadax July 22 2011, 16:25:00 UTC

Wow, that was fast! I bet it's going to be very good.

Harry's powers seem awesome and he should think how useful they could be in his job.

"There was a reason the Ministry had given up using him in any work that involved secrecy and subtlety"

That was hilarious XD

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:00:58 UTC

I deliberately wanted to try a faster-paced fic and see what happened. And I have written the next chapter and like it a lot.

Harry isn't thinking about anything right now except how to be rid of these wings.

Thank you.

dameange July 22 2011, 17:35:15 UTC

oh my God, yes. sooo can't wait for the next part. Harry, thank you for not holding out like some scared virgin.

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:01:19 UTC

Thanks!

This Harry is more cynical and experienced than some of my others, and knows a good thing when he sees one.

nursedarry July 22 2011, 17:39:29 UTC

Um...hello? *picks up computer and shakes it*

There's more under here, RIGHT?!!!!

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:01:41 UTC

There will be more on Monday. Or possibly Sunday. (Depends).

serari_chan July 22 2011, 19:08:33 UTC

When I finish organizing my closet, that last scene = my sketch pad...

lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:02:10 UTC

Well, thank you! And thank you for the beautiful scenes from Intoxicate the Sun, by the way. The panels are especially good, and the way that Draco looks like he's about to fall off the edge of the world.

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lomonaaeren July 23 2011, 02:04:03 UTC

Thank you!

Draco really does want to sleep with Harry and think he's hot/attractive. Whether that would hold out if the wings vanished is, of course, another question.