Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Three of 'Flare'- Exigencies of Living

lomonaaeren

Chapter Three of 'Flare'- Exigencies of Living

Jul 19, 2011 12:21

humor, novel-length, harry/draco, angst, creature!fic, auror!fic, flare, rated r or nc-17, pov: harry, romance, ewe, ron/hermione

Comments 22

helenadax July 19 2011, 17:16:37 UTC

Ouch, poor Harry. Having healing tears can be a problem, some people might want to have free access to phoenix tears. But it's also useful, as we've seen.

Draco and his wing fetish XD I wonder if that's all or he's attracted to Harry for other reasons too.

lomonaaeren July 19 2011, 23:05:18 UTC

Well, Harry could always try bottling and selling the tears if he wanted. :)

He's going to explain more about that in the next chapter.

anubiswolfe July 19 2011, 17:17:38 UTC

I am dying to know what Draco's game is. If he really knows more about this then he's letting on or is just totally enthralled. Either way of course, it's turning out great. (:

The whole tearing of the feathers and the reaction it caused in Harry was a bit scary! I hope he doesn't try something like that again, though I reckon he won't.

Poor Ron. He's so worried. It was a bit strange to have him almost beg for Harry to stay with Draco, but I suppose that's just his nerves and concern getting the better of him. Draco does appear to know what he's doing...

So many questions!

lomonaaeren July 19 2011, 23:06:02 UTC

Draco has some shrewd guesses about the phoenix wings that he intends to share in the next chapter. Of course, Harry might not really want to hear them...

No, this Harry is a bit more sensible than some of the ones I write. He won't do something so stupid without warning again.

Thank you!

piratesmile331 July 19 2011, 17:47:37 UTC

Yes, Draco, I think you should do a VERY INTENSIVE STUDY OF HARRY AND HIS SEXY WINGS.
And I love when Ron is sensible and smart.

lomonaaeren July 19 2011, 23:06:23 UTC

Thanks! Ron is a bit smarter than Harry in this story, at least in some situations.

hogwartshoney July 19 2011, 20:45:14 UTC

Oh, man, that tearing-out-of-feathers thing had me twitching. *shudderrrrrrr*

I love that Ron is a pragmatic individual in this fic; it makes for an interesting dynamic between him and Malfoy.

lomonaaeren July 19 2011, 23:06:44 UTC

Thank you!

It will, especially when Harry starts trying to solve the problem of the wings more enthusiastically.

hogwartshoney July 19 2011, 23:51:16 UTC

I love the idea of the wings. Would love to see your artwork of it, even if it's just a rough sketch

thrilladdict July 19 2011, 22:07:01 UTC

Poor Harry, he's having such a bad time he didn't even flinch when he hurted himself. Hopefully D can help him rethink this so he can feel more confortable with the wings?

lomonaaeren July 19 2011, 23:07:07 UTC

Thank you!

Well, he did cry. But he was more angry than hurt, that's true.