Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Three of 'Flare'- Exigencies of Living

lomonaaeren

Chapter Three of 'Flare'- Exigencies of Living

Jul 19, 2011 12:21

humor, novel-length, harry/draco, angst, creature!fic, auror!fic, flare, rated r or nc-17, pov: harry, romance, ewe, ron/hermione

Comments 22

rhiannon_flying July 19 2011, 22:21:42 UTC

Wow. Ron has really grown up, hasn't he? I'm impressed, as I don't think theres enough Mature!Ron in H/D fandom.

I'm really loving this one.

lomonaaeren July 19 2011, 23:07:25 UTC

He has. And I've been trying to write him as more mature in the last few stories, too.

Thank you.

dameange July 20 2011, 00:17:45 UTC

so, uh, it's amazing how Draco could laden that much innuendo into less than ten words. wow, hot.

ashcake0405 July 20 2011, 00:29:16 UTC

why does harry always have to fight everything tooth and nail? I don't think he realises that he seems to make his problems even worse than they are by being difficult all the time. Where is your maturity Harry? I am interested to see what Draco's fascination with the wings are.

lijahlover July 20 2011, 05:48:16 UTC

Oh Harry you poor thing you can be so foolish at times.

Ron is very mature in this I like that a lot.

lemonade8 July 20 2011, 06:27:27 UTC

Draco's reaction to the wings is very interesting. Harry being the only one to notice it is as well. I am left wondering why the ripping out of the feathers is so painful. Also, that the wings seem to have an effect on his libido makes me wonder if he would lose that if he got rid of them. That would be a little scary, to have to choose between having wings and losing sexual desire for the rest of your life.