Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Twenty-Seven of 'Practicing Liars'- Break the Circle

lomonaaeren

Chapter Twenty-Seven of 'Practicing Liars'- Break the Circle

Dec 29, 2009 14:21

practicing liars, action/adventure, pov: multiple, novel-length, harry/draco, angst, set at hogwarts, drama, preslash, au, rated r or nc-17, ron/hermione

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lunasky3 December 30 2009, 06:14:41 UTC

"but this he could not bear, to watch his son be stolen from him."--I began cheering at this point :D:D I love Snape here so much

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 04:01:57 UTC

Thanks! He's improving.

anonymous December 30 2009, 19:55:38 UTC

Wonderful new chapter! :) I'm glad that Harry is slowly transforming(?) his irrationality... and oh, love how you've explained Prince Family history along with the Elieen and the bloodline curse!! ^_^ Is she still alive in this Verse? *scratches head* I can't remember...

Awwwww. the H/D is totally making my fangirl squee-points. hand-holding! \o/

Hope you had a lovely X'mas darling, and the best of 2010 if I don't get to wish you before the New Year!

xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Su
(Soft2smooth2000)
p.s. Am with relatives this season and am having limited cyber-time. woe! ^_^

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 04:02:32 UTC

Thank you!

Eileen isn't alive. I'm taking the position that Snape cares enough about blood that he would have been much more concerned with her if she was.

Happy holidays to you!

mathnerd December 31 2009, 18:34:33 UTC

Hmm, now I want a fic where Draco fulfils that threat. ;)

Beautiful and touching and making me tear up in the airport. Thank you!

lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 04:02:40 UTC

Aw, thanks!

cheshyre January 2 2010, 20:59:18 UTC

BTW, may I make a request?

Could you include a link to the PREVIOUS chapter of the fic where you link to Chapter One?

When I'm reading fics as you post them (rather than in a batch after the story has been completed), I usually need to refresh my memory on where the story left off.

Either a link to the previous chapter, or just recopying the last few paragraphs of the previous chapter before the new chapter starts (did you ever see old-school Dr. Who? They'd replay the cliffhanger and then continue the scene) would be most helpful.

Thanks.

yanagi_wa January 4 2010, 00:51:34 UTC

Wow! Very powerful stuff. Harry sure made a mess of things. I'm glad Severus was there to save him. And Draco, Harry squeezing his hand was so sweet. Excellent.