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anonymous December 30 2009, 00:50:21 UTC
Awww...Severus is gonna fix it...yay. And Draco came by and said something at the end...this chapter makes me feel like everything will be okay in the end.

Can't wait for the next update. And for how on earth Severus is gonna fix the Horcrux problem in Harry. And what Draco said that Harry missed. Gah. Really can't wait!
-Jolene

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lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 04:00:09 UTC
Thank you! I plan a happy ending for this story, though I can appreciate how that might be hard to believe at the moment.

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sasoka December 30 2009, 02:47:58 UTC
Ah! Another brilliant chapter~

Loved the Snape Harry development, and the part with Draco just added to...the...awesomeness. Yeah. ..Anyway, yeah, great job!

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lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 04:00:25 UTC
Thank you! I like the ellipses in your review. :)

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callistianstar December 30 2009, 03:22:55 UTC
This was such a lovely and sweet chapter. I was a bit scared for Harry in the beginning of course, but I'm glad Snape saved him. I did have doubts for at least one moment.

(Whoever cast the curse probably made it so that the person who had it would be afraid of other people for some reason, and afraid to ask for help.)

I love how Harry worked that out and is coming back from his extreme level of paranoia. Great job with the creation of this curse.

(“If you ever do that again, I swear, I’m going to tie you to a bed and just keep you there. The house-elves can help you go to the loo. I’m going to feed you myself. And I’ll help the elves change your clothes, and someone will always be there to watch you if I can’t. You need something like that.”)

And this ending is absolutely precious. I love this chapter.

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lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 04:01:09 UTC
Thank you!

It helped that Harry worked it out for himself, or at least had some proof in his own behavior. He's always more convinced when he's the one to come to certain decisions or conclusions.

Draco wasn't in this chapter much, but I decided to make up for that by ending with a bang.

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Practicing Liars 27 slashpuppy December 30 2009, 05:03:39 UTC
Thank goodness for Snape! I was worried that Death Eaters would get ahold of Harry and they came so, so close!

And I like Draco's worry/threat! I had a picture in mind of Harry strapped to a bed with Draco sitting on him just to be safe! :-)

Loving this story and looking forward to more! :-)

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Re: Practicing Liars 27 lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 04:01:33 UTC
Thank you!

Draco would probably do more than just sitting on Harry...

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16dara December 30 2009, 05:57:58 UTC

I love the way you explain the blood curse...
and Draco in the end was...perfect.

thank you for another chapter.

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lomonaaeren January 2 2010, 04:01:41 UTC
Thank you!

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