Comments | lomonaaeren: Chapter Seventeen of 'For Their Unconquerable Souls'- Narcissa to the Rescue

lomonaaeren

Chapter Seventeen of 'For Their Unconquerable Souls'- Narcissa to the Rescue

Nov 26, 2008 20:25

pov: multiple, novel-length, harry/draco, mystery, angst, for their unconquerable souls, lucius/narcissa, unusual career!draco, unusual career!harry, rated r or nc-17, sequels, romance, ewe

Comments 13

agr8fae November 27 2008, 01:55:33 UTC

This chapter was so amazing. Narcissa's worry and emotions seemed like they pour out of the screen and into my head. They were nearly palpable. Incredible chapter.

cheshyre November 27 2008, 02:00:06 UTC

Wonderful... I love these insights you're providing.

nimue_8 November 27 2008, 02:15:55 UTC

I adore Narcissa's tenderness towards Harry. He's been so deprived of maternal love.

And who knew, Narcissa and Lucius can be slashed? LoL I feel like a child who thinks his/her parents could never know what sex is and probably never had any!

anonymous November 27 2008, 03:55:16 UTC

I continue to love all of your perfect little touches which reveal more of the personalities of the different characters, such as Narcissa's wandless nonverbal hair spell and Lucius' replacing the library floor with sky-colored glass for her.

gilith_ramaloce November 27 2008, 06:59:57 UTC

Ahhh, yay. I've been waiting for this chapter, and it was as good as I had hoped. I adore Narcissa in this version of the story and her wanting to just hold and touch Harry makes me so happy. Love it!