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lollyribena

[One Shot] The Perfect Equation

Sep 05, 2008 17:52

Title : The Perfect Equation
Length : One Shot (1090 words)
Author : lollyribena
Pairing : Yunjae/slight Yooso
Rating : G
Genre : Fluff
Summary : A day out for the boys.

( Dolphin laughter filled the air as Junsu pummeled Changmin to the lawn, rolling on the flowerbed until Yunho stomped his feet, hands on the hips. )

fluff, yooso, dbsk, tvxq, jaeho, yusoomin, yunjae

Comments 20

chloe1910 September 5 2008, 11:42:48 UTC

aw..this is so nice...How I wish that one day, our boys really have the time in the world to do something as simple and as relaxing as this in future...awayfrom stress and away from eyes of rabid fans...

Ah...we gotta love one possesive!leadershii huh? Well, his Joongie is his alone and no baby of the group or anyone could wrestle away Jae's attention from him..hahaha...Love the Yunjaeness and the subtle Yoosuness and a playful baby Min...

lollyribena September 5 2008, 12:35:06 UTC

OMG I just realized the fonts. EWWW! BRB CHANGE FONT

lollyribena September 5 2008, 12:40:34 UTC

Back :D

I wish for the same too :) sometimes I get irritated seeing those famcam pics of the boys. They have absolutely no privacy at all and it's taking away their youth. Heh, Yunnie will always be possesive of Jaejoong, whether in fanfic or in real life ^^ Well, you don't expect me to leave out Yoosu, don't you!

8D

sidmaron September 5 2008, 11:52:01 UTC

very cute~ <3
^_____^

hope they remain a family till death! kya~!

schu(h)

lollyribena September 5 2008, 12:51:03 UTC

Me too, me too :D
Thanks for the comment !

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lollyribena September 5 2008, 12:53:21 UTC

HEHE YEAH. When she told me abt u saying Dong Bulge Shin Ki?
I literally LOL-ed! I can't believe u said that with a straight face.

ime08 September 5 2008, 13:29:18 UTC

owhh they act like cute dork in the zoo^^
n the last paragraph means so much for me XDD
thanx for sharing~

lollyribena September 6 2008, 04:36:06 UTC

Hee, thanks ;D
I <3 the last paragraph too ((:

*hugs adorkable boys*

dapdaphae September 5 2008, 15:55:03 UTC

LOLOLOL. You already know I like this xD

Just the five of them; it completes the picture, perfecting the bond as one unit. OT5 <333

DONG BULGE SHIN KI FTW.

lollyribena September 6 2008, 04:38:04 UTC

LOL You got me addicted to DONG BULGE SHIN KI !!
I can't stop saying it to my sister, which she went, wth? ahahaha Gone nuts.

Heh yeah, I like that line too. ;)

Yeah DONG BULGE SHIN KI FTW xD

lollyribena September 6 2008, 04:42:44 UTC

Oh and. I can't stop staring at your icon.

dapdaphae September 6 2008, 06:11:24 UTC

it's delicious isn't it? 8D