To Atone For My Silence

[lollipopkins89]

Does lonliness come from inside?

Or from your "best frineds" and "boyfriends"

Who leave you wonderin:

Who, what, where, when....

WHY?

Does my lonliness eminate from within me?

Collapsing my dreams of happiness

Closing my relationships

Like doors

Is it me that runs and pushes

And tears away like a scared

Little

Girl that only knows one thing

but she

Comments

[c0mp1xsimp1city]

ok so i really did read it twice as a matter a fact i thought it was so good that i beleive i read it four times. i like it with the stuff u cut out but it's still great with out it. so you can write it either way and it woould still be great. it's really up to you. but thats my view on it. though i probably didnt help since i said either was was fine...lol. well i'll talk to you later
smooches ;*

[lollipopkins89]

Thanks for reading. I love your userpic! Where did you get it?

[c0mp1xsimp1city]

thanks i did a search for icons on google...i think and found a bunch of ones i liked. yeah of the three i have uploaded that one is my favorite

[lilcaramel_kiss]

i might comment later cuz i have to go drop some kids off @ the pool. badly.

[lollipopkins89]

Oh no. TMI

[superchick2407]

lisa, i love you. please make sure you don't lock your "best friends" out. we're here for you

[ljjunky]

i love it lisa. you're an outstanding poet. i'm still gonna knock on the door because i miss you like crazy. anyway, did mimi tell you about this weekend? i really hope you can come. this separation thing is not working...i'm having withdrawls.