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Cloud no. 9

Dec 30, 2010 07:56

1) All fills for prompts of the earlier prompt posts go in the post the prompt was posted in. No re-posting or splitting up prompts and fills.
2) Self-prompt when you post unprompted fic. (This means posting what the fill is about in a first comment, like a real prompt, and commenting on that with your fill.)
3) Try not to get too srs business. ( Read more... )

prompting: 09

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Dark, angsty, painful Burnballs. anonymous January 13 2011, 16:14:11 UTC

I want them crying all over each other and beating each other up and kissing each others scars and bruises and yelling at each other. i don't know what could possibly cause such a scene aha, but we have had a lot of crack fics recently so an emotional angsty fic would be lovely right now ;)

Also I kind of feel like with Burnballs, they can't really live with each other but cant live without kind of thing. There relationship would never be easy (even though it SHOULD with them being best friends an all...and i think the fact that its so damn hard and they never realised it would be is a cause of a lot of angst.) idk. And this has kind of turned into me discussing the nature of their relationship...so oops. :')

Traffic lights. part 1/? anonymous January 19 2011, 10:22:36 UTC

It all started out just being fun. Fighting, punching, struggling over who would be on top that night. Hair pulling and Ed could see the twinkle in Andy’s face as he gave in. Because he was usually the one that gave in. He loved losing as much as he loved winning, and he didn’t have to get through that barrier of giving up control. Not like Ed. And it was fun, it was just about lust, and what’s so bad about that? Neither of them was quite sure when these other emotions crept in. Irritation and jealousy and petty fights over nothing. The fights became rougher and Ed knew Andy’s boundaries, knew how to push just past them so that Andy would let himself lose more quickly. Ed rarely lost these fights anymore. It wasn’t that he didn’t want to, all the emotions just made it so much harder. And they were tired and angry and they didn’t want to talk to each other’s annoyed faces so Ed just ended up pushing Andy’s face into the carpet and shagging him with a hand twisted behind his back. And things were better afterwards. Not perfect, just ( ... )

Re: Traffic lights. part 1/? anonymous January 19 2011, 13:40:56 UTC

D: F5! Oh, EdB, why do you so lend youself to self-loathing? <3

Dubcon/violence warning for later parts, perhaps? :) Doesn't bother me personally, but it did pop up on flatview with no explanation or warning, so just to be on the safe side...

Re: Traffic lights. part 1/? anonymous January 19 2011, 14:54:02 UTC

Gently into the horror, anon! The self-delusions! The spiralling out of control! I wanted to hide behind the sofa.

And the last sentence? HA. Team Burnham!

Re: Traffic lights. part 1/? anonymous January 19 2011, 16:00:43 UTC

Ooh, this is lovely. Angry and confused with a wonderful sense that Ed has no fucking idea what he's doing. I love that feeling of instinct in your writing. Can't wait to see where this goes.

DUBCON WARNING FOR THE ABOVE anonymous January 19 2011, 17:53:12 UTC

not sure about future warnings, but I'll remember to put them in the titles next time.

Re: Traffic lights. part 1/? anonymous January 23 2011, 22:17:11 UTC

(Op here)

Oh my goodness this was absolutely wonderful (and horrifying at the same time...but thats the point right? :P)
I maybe shouldn't have enjoyed reading this as much as I did. I love things that break the fine line between the sexviolence and real hate. I've just come to the conclusion I love Burnballs no matter what it is; violent, smutty or fluffy...i just love these two so much!

Wonderful characterisation and writing. :D

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